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tobia
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Creepy, beautiful, poignant. Thank you so much for this!
Comicbookfan
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Good job writing in second person.

I didn't figure out House was dead until the second to last one.

Somehow, this was very sad, but the final part was somewhat comforting.

Commi
Harm Marie
2008-11-11 . chapter 1
Amazing story. Loved the twist.
TrapperII
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
Very, very cool twist at the end their. Loved it!
Ace
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
i adore this story
i rarely read something that makes my heart turn over
its really great
thank you =]
Foolish Mortal
2008-02-27 . chapter 1
that was REALLY cool, and an interesting way of writing it! I am a a bit of a science fiction/supernatural lover myself, and I enjoy seeing it incorporated into stories.
This was a lovely way of writing a House short story; the rise and fall of the story, toying with the reader's expectations, was very effective, and the way you tie it up leaves a little chill down the reader's spine. Well written! Thank you!
Kamp
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
wow. that was kinda shocking.i so was not expecting it. but it was very well-written. wow.
missaffliction
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
Oh my. That was beautiful. I loved the description of the moment where Wilson thought he was alone with the statue of House and the image of the spectre looking longing into Wilson's window. The inclusion of Cameron was a great idea also, as well as the woman who claimed that he didn't look scary at ll, just sad.

I loved how it from a random person;s point of view, making him represent possibly countless people who'd gone through the same hazing ritual of House fear :)

Absolutely AMAZING job! :D
Sakura-chan
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
Oh. That was like a punch in the gut. Really really powerful.
Qem
2007-12-12 . chapter 1
This. Is. Absolutely breathtakingly fantastic.

I had to reread the story it was just that brilliant.
Whitelight72
2007-09-10 . chapter 1
Why was everyone telling him to avoid House if House was dead? And why is Wilson old?
Kazuki Landen
2007-09-07 . chapter 1
This is so sad... I'm actually crying... I can't believe how well you write... I cant actually say what I liked about it, I'm just completely speechless...

Damn, I really am crying.
Kaydee
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Wow...just wow.

That was absolutely amazing! I really didn't it coming.
I especially loved the last paragraph, it was a lovely thought to end on.

*adds to favourites*

Well done!
Leista
2007-05-02 . chapter 1
That, that was beautiful. I didn't know what to expect going in to this, but the ending really shocked me. In a very good, heartbreaking, tear-jerking(I admit) way. You have very real talent.
Short-Stuff Serpent
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
That was amazing. So touching.
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