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Mat49324
2009-06-14 . chapter 2
It is horrible. You're a loser with a lame life for writing this. your chapters are too long and too boring. Review my story "The date with Nabiki?" so you can see what a real writer can do. If you can find my story that is.

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Red Dragonfly
2009-05-08 . chapter 2
I really love the way you capture Ryoga and Ukyo's voices. I feel like they are both true to character and yet more poignant than in the manga/anime. I really liked the short, but sweet New Year's chapter, but you do leave us wondering what happened in the year between White Days. Is it the subject of one of your other fanfictions? Anyway, thanks for the update. It was really nice.
FangirlLynHibiki
2009-02-11 . chapter 2
This story was so well written. It made me all warm and fuzzy inside, great job really^^ Ryoga and Ukyo are 2 perfect for eachother!
SouJiro-LoVeR
2009-01-07 . chapter 2
oh my gosh... i LOVE your writing! i definitely enjoyed this fic... i liked the fact that ryoga and ukyo have a lot of dialogue in the first chap. it was sweet, feisty, and you could totally imagine it happening. XD the second chap was awesome. their interaction was very sincere, and it was nice to see them be so unguarded with each other. seeing them get along especially during a time of year when they'd usually be alone. really nice. i would actually would have loved to know what was written in that 5 page letter. i wanted a teeny tiny glimpse of it. but i guess that was part of the mystery, best left to our imagination. the end of the 2nd chap was pretty vague, but you were able to work up the details to allude to a very happy ending. seems like they haven't forgotten that fleeting moment after all. =)

thank you so much for writing this =) keep up the good work!
anyahibiki
2009-01-02 . chapter 2
Thank you for this update! It was a wonderful story...
Rei Sabere
2009-01-01 . chapter 2
a nice holiday treat :) so happy you continued it :D

thanks for your work :)
Baitdcat
2009-01-01 . chapter 2
Thanks for the update Ninnik! Love your stories as always. And a happy new year to you too. Thanks for the information at the end of the stories too.
SithKnight-Galen
2009-01-01 . chapter 2
Very nice conclusion, and very timely as well, just like Ryoga's first White day letter. The only thing I guess I wish I could have seen would have been what he wrote in that second, longer letter to Ukyo.

Here's to a Happy New Year to you, and I hope to see more of your work, regardless of the genre!
The Azure Penguin
2008-12-31 . chapter 2
I'm so happy you decided to continue this fic with a follow-up chapter! Yay! I thought for sure you've ditched us Ry/Uk fans, but here you are! I'm very glad that my fave author is back, heh. 5 stars! Happy new year!
Jinnai
2008-12-31 . chapter 2
A good ending to a good story. Nice to see it done, also. This combined with your other, non-ranma related works have provided much entertainment.
Rei Sabere
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
that was totally priceless. i love this pairing, i love the title, i love the story! the composition really described the whole incident perfectly!do more stories please?thanks!hehe! great job!
Ruto Kuntai
2006-12-28 . chapter 1
Great story; I think of holidays when I read this.

Thank you for all your hard work making this, and for making it so long.

R.K
loaned
2006-12-12 . chapter 1
Quite interesting.^^. I liked the interaction, it was friendlyt and quite nice.^^. Good job and keep up the good work!^^
SithKnight-Galen
2006-12-12 . chapter 1
Thank you for the wonderful gift this holiday season :). despite everyone's various beliefs and practices, what you have shared with all of us is something well worth treasuring and enjoying.
Jou-pup
2006-12-11 . chapter 1
Oh! I christmas fic! Now that's a good gift. I cry for the lack of halloween story. Maybe another time?
I didn't see the christmas special and your story really made me want to see it. I hope it's on youtube.
Hmm, I don't have a lot of things to say for this story, sorry. All I can say is that I love the warm "friendly" vibes going on between Ryoga and Ukyo. It's at times like these that friendship fics feel better than romance fics...nah, nuh uh no way! Bring on the kisses!
All in all, I love it. It made me warm inside and I laughed at the card game mishaps. I think I'll never grow tired of reading your stories. At least the Ryoga/Ukyo ones. :P

Jou-pup

PS: The exit epilogue? Woohoo!
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