That's good! Slightly angst, but I think it was supposed to be! It turned out great.

This is really good. REALLY good.

I love how you showed that they are not perfect together, not at all...that they really have nothing that should go for them as a couple, yet they burn so brightly together...

They aren't made for each other, not by a long shot...but they have matching souls.

I love it!

Intriguing. I like this new perspective on Lerant.

Thoughtful and a bit different; you've shown another dimension to them without changing the characters. Nice.

I hope you do more with this. Apparently Kel/Lerant is my kind of crazy too.

"The real difference between them is that she’s chosen to move on, chosen not to be bitter."

Just this-- Kel's level of self-delusion is a scary, scary thing.

That was brilliant; you changed the entire relationship without changing it at all, and you put so much of the two characters "real" elements in that when they did something that was maybe a little different to what they'd do in canon, it didn't matter - I just accepted it. So, yeah. It was great - and you've catered to my rare-pairing fetish for today!

I have never even thought about this pairing before, and certainly never read a fic like it. I really liked it, well done!

-MSB

Its weird, but I like it, very good, I commend you, you've tied it all together nicely.

Mm. I like it.

These odd pairings are so rare so it's always nice to see one, and I think you kept it very realistic and well-written. Well done.