Aw! I absolutely loved this!

hey!! luv the Fanfic! =D probebly the best 1 ive read yet w/this pairing!

good story

Love it! Gaasaku is so cute! neat one-shot!

it was great!

Great, great, GREAT job!

Very sweet and well written, just divide it in more chapters next time please :) thanks

that was really sweet! i loved it!!

First off may I say very cute fic! Umm as far as constructive crticism goes I would reccomend cutting out repetative thoughts or what not. Alluding to what's going on in a character's head can sometimes paint a better picture than saying it three or four different ways in a few paragraphs. I will say that I love the character growth! And I was super excited that your grammer was wonderful (I've seen too many choppy sentences in other stories lately). So, a parting piece of advice every writer needs: double check for typos or wonky sentences. Thanks for posting! : )

omg i luv this story!
keep writing

Wow...this was very good! A few things here and there, but overall this was an excellent piece. I love it!

wow probably the best gaasaku story ive ever heard!

Awesome!

At long last..I FINISHED! ^__^ great job Yami. Keep it up!

You sure can write a story ya know! I absolutely lovedit! I'm happy that you decided towrite it!