Seriously?!?! That's the end? Sorry for freaking out, but I am so mad at you now! SERIOUSLY?!?! I love this story! You can't do that! I'm so mad. And what does /lj-cut mean? I'm so mad! It's OK, though. I can fill in the rest in my head... right? Ugh, you're making me crazy! I need the rest of the story! There has to be more!

OK, just in case you change your mind, I'm subscribing to the story. If you don't change your mind about expanding more, well that's too bad for me, because this is one of the best stories I have read for a long time. So, whatever happens, thank you for posting. ^^

Yay! Awesome chapter, again.

Wow. You've got me hooked. I am absolutely amazed at your writing. It's so smooth, and the description is so vivid, and despite talking about his... um... *cough* you know... lol, kidding. I guess it doesn't bother me that much, because the writing itself makes up for whatever disturbing feelings I might get while reading that, but I'll deal. Anyway, the story is amazing. Man, you're an amazing writer, and I have no idea how you do it. You're my hero!

Wow, this is really good! I'm not really an AlxWinry fan, mostly because I have an awesome OC who ends up with him (yay factor), but this is really good. I'm really excited to read more!

Very good; I liked it, though there were a few moments that I probably would have changed (like, as a yaoi fangirl, putting him with a male Sacrifice, though considering Al isn't close very many other males in his world, that would be difficult...), but I liked the way it turned out.
Ed is insanely in character, and Al, for being another person, is as well. That was very good, and Roy's amazing, though how'd he get there, because he never actually /died/...
Anyways, I would love to see a sequal, but, it's up to you.

aw...it's really sweet, and a little bit sad...
i liked reading it a lot...
please make a sequel!

Wow! This was an amazing crossover! This has to be the first loveless/FMA xover that I have truly enjoyed and wished for more of!! And I'm sorry but I have to sque at the image of Ed with ears! Also loved the bit about Ed noticing Al didnt have ears hehe!

I really would love to see an epilogue with Ed and Al together, and perhaps Soubi and Ritsuka there too, maybe find out how Ed and Roy got there!

I can't believe you only have 1 review for this, it truly is fantastic!

well... it's no doubt different from what I would have written it like (for instance: "how old are you?"
"15... going on 16". I would have said 10)
The people's names in this also confused me because i didn't remember anyone from loveless named yoko or kaz... but it was good, i enjoyed it