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rozzy07 2007-01-15 ch 14,	abuseSifi, Girl, what an emotional ending, balanced between the sheer joy of Dean getting back 'his' Laura (still wonderfully blue too!) counteracted by the dark reality that the BigBad is tearing apart whole universes gearing up for its final war of wars. And John Winchester - what has he become inured to? Big Yellow eyes is his sanctuary now? On so not good. Now that the variety of strands have been pulled together I can see the world horrifying awful to come. The might 'what if's' litter the future but still hope has to exist, populated across the variety of universes with people of such strength like our Sam & Dean. Not all can make it, some have already crumbled and become destroyers of things rather than the protectors, but some (those that we love so dearly) though have already become the warriors for good that they should be. Fragmented they are all so fragile, but solid they are so much stronger. So even with the dark warnings that you have painted for me to see I am still left in no doubt on whose side the Bros Winchesters will be fighting. And will hopefully kick butt long to come. Just looking forward to you weaving your magic on the continuation of this wonderful inventive story arc! Rozzy P.s. Mad-Deano makes so much sense now - the one act he should never had been burdened with truly has destroyed him and all around him. A warning of what path not to take for both brothers. Again wonderfully explored.
CatBeist 2007-01-14 ch 14,	abuseSee... Even though I have read this before I still went "No... it's the end"... I am strange I know :D And Dean got his Laura... that make me happy Beist! Man this fic was/is great... man... and yes... you do have something to live up too now, haha, but then again I don't doubt that you will live up to it or raise the bar or something... So think I have to read that mail now... gonnah be yet another late night... man why did everyone post chapters at the weekend... I fall behind! :D Ok... enough rant... So... thanks for writing these great stories! :) -Beist
TraSan 2007-01-14 ch 14,	abuseI almost missed the conclusion! I enjoyed it a lot. Not only was it a fun sci-fi extension of SPN, but a glimpse into Dean's darker side. It just goes to show how many different paths our lives can take based on events, and our reactions to them.
Lilithxfic 2007-01-13 ch 14,	abuseOhh U always end the chap in a way I want more!! writers have evil minds! I always knew that lol ;) great update! more coming soon?
brighette 2007-01-13 ch 14,	abuseConstantly playing catch up recently! All done - glad Laura and Dean are reunited :) Hm, evil ending though - that John is being comforted by YED? Wow!
Nana56 2007-01-13 ch 14,	abuseThat's it!?!?!?!? There's a sequel, right? You can't leave us hanging like this. Plenty more to do here. We have to help those people - the other John who lost his boys and the Dean & Sam that Laura just left. OMG!! PLEASE!! SEQUEL! Just a really great job and I'm glad I stuck with it! Thanks for the ride.
Nvrmore 2007-01-13 ch 14,	abuseEww... you know, what happened to make crazyDean crazy, is just a little more... poignant after Thursday's episode. sniff Aw - "Loved." What a sweet boy. Gotta love ya, Dean. "Are you... blue?" - "Tired" lol. ha ha. Laura's funny , and I think she enjoys being naked. :) O... Big Bad has an enemy! His very own evil doppleganger. Well, that's kinda scary. JOHN! Whafa? Oh... um, that begs the question... is this another yed? I mean, we know there is our boys yed, and then evilYED who destroyed the sidhe world... is this a third yed, too? Ha ha. oh, that's terrible. Fantastic story. Wonderful ending...though, it better not be the end end. You can't leave it there. Please! :)
rozzy07 2007-01-12 ch 13,	abuseWhere to begin here?! Sam pulling slivers of glass from his damaged brother's hands desperate to get him the hell out of dodge, out of range, before he suffers another episode. Oh and your Psycho Dean and the 2 kids is not good - but his ranting to his brother though made sense in a perverse way ...Sammy is his kid, no-one else, but his. This mad-Dean is as scary as hell and really does need to be taken out. Damaged beyond redemption. Then next lets slide back to your Dean & Laura, both missing their better halves desperately but hanging onto each other substituting that need with a warm sweet connection that is almost brotherly/sisterly in nature. Loved the genuine banter between the two. Dean really would kick the other Dean's ass if he hurt Laura me thinks. And then (Yay) our gorgeous Sammy has made his escape from the hospital and the Feds and has made it back to his brother's side and a still blue Laura. Now the brothers are back together in this universe and with Laura readying to kick butt things are starting to look a little bit more positive for our guys. Yummy stuff as always. Roz.
rozzy07 2007-01-12 ch 12,	abuseWell this is my 2nd attempt to review - the last one got eaten up never to reappear into that blackhole of screwup! Now that I'm a little calmer let me just say Sifi I did a little jig of joy with this little chapter - Laura is back!! Dean's reconnection with her was just so real even is she a lovely shade of blue and bleeding! Not 'his' Laura tho but she'll do...they both need to be there for each other no matter what universe they inhabit. In another reality Dean without her is reaching crumbling point. Smashing his fist into a mirror to slice into himself, to feel physical pain is just a manifistation of his mental pain. Thank god for your 'emphatic' Sam. Loved how you are starting to pull those loose strands at the start of this story into a tighter more woven picture. The 'fragments' are starting to knit together and the story emerging is as startling and as amazing I knew you would make it. Skillful story telling at its best. Roz.
rozzy07 2007-01-11 ch 11,	abuseSifi, as always your ability to write out strips my ability to imagine. This fantastical multilayered realities that 'our' Dean has now frighteningly become more lucid of is at a price. Seeing now thru his eyes the damage done, the pain inflicted, the evil done OCDEAN (& by one particular nasty son of a bitch Dean) is so graphic, so hurtful to read at times that you want to whimper with our current Dean out loud. Thankful for small mercies thrown his way at least he has 'his' Sam, digging deeper, never complacent, ever searchhing for answers, uber-geek little brother that he is. Anyway girl sorry for the late review but I am hot tailing it across to chapter 12 so I imagine you are going to be pretty sick of my gushing by the end of the night! Roz.
Nana56 2007-01-11 ch 13,	abuseReally good chapter! I loved this one a lot...the care our Sam is taking with our Dean, the care the other Dean took care of our Laura and how both Deans want the evil Dean dead. I'm really glad the other Sam and Dean are able to be together again. So happy that worked out! Update soon. (holds breath)
Nvrmore 2007-01-11 ch 13,	abuseE! You know, it's so sad that Dean is so consumed by evildean, he can't see wannabedean with his woman. He really needs Laura right about now. Just glad Sammy's around Good boy, Sammy. Sometimes, it's best to leave - live to fight another day - rather than risk losing him. They can't really "fix" this anyway. I love that Laura was nekked. Aside from being funny... Alex was too when she went there, eh? Nice. Ok... Evildean is just... crazy. and vulgar... but mostly crazy... and seems to be getting crazier. I love the interactions between Laura and wannabedean. Full of tension and still loving. It's that... so close, yet so far. Hee hee. I love Dean's playfulness. He just can't resist himself. I hope his Laura comes back to him. But, i'm glad our boy's getting his back. Very nice. Great chapter. And thanks for the very rapid updates. You're spoiling me. Whatever will I do when this story is over? sniff
Lilithxfic 2007-01-11 ch 13,	abuseTBC... I dont kn whats worst... cliffies...tbc... hehehehehe Great chap!! as always!! update soon ;) have a great week and good wiritng!
timetowaste247 2007-01-10 ch 13,	abuseI think this story kinda misses some balance. It just seems that all the alternative Deans are all bad. Wouldn't it of been fun to play with a happier version as well as all the bad ones. Were going to need a reason to why this is happening to Dean and not Sam. Since the current theory it that it is area related and that if they leave things will stop happening to Dean.
CatBeist 2007-01-10 ch 13,	abuseLaura is blue daba di daba da daba di daba da dabadi dabada... "Listen up here's a story about a little...gril.. that live in a blue world"... Well do I know she don't... no I don't... and even if the song might be a pain in the ass song... it's pretty much a huge inside joke soccer humor thing... So... man... you know the love is there... it couldn't be there more if you payed me... and I have said this before, I'm sure, but I don't know what it is... cus well... few of the SN girls in the actual show "we" don't like... at least not the once Dean meat... lol.. go figure.. but I wish he could meet a Laura... maybe not one who travel between realms and turn up blue here and there but just someone like her... So you have done good writing in creating her... Ok.. sorry no longer rant... people are about to wake up over here... so will have to go sleepsleep... do we sleep away 1/3 of our life..? That is a lot... man... well at least I don't haha... ok I do... just not from nigt to morning... more... early morning to early day :D Ok.. so love the story... love the chapter... still crack me up that she's blue... why you made her blue in the first place is a mystery in itself... but a fun one indeed.. :D

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