aw him and his moss ball, i hope he found another in starclan, its so adorable, i wish he didnt die

ok no offence to daisy lovers, but in my thoughts, she can rot in hellclan! awesome though. i feel ad for brightheart, stupid daisy.

I see nothing wrong with the names "Spiderleg, Whitewing, or Birchfall" they seem quite nice, differnent then the normal, slightly boring names.

This is great! Ha, the Spiderleg one is really funny. Honeyhappy, LOL. Firestar IS pretty bad at naming cats, but I really like the name Whitewing.
And, you know, I always Birchfall symbolised the destruction of the old forest; i.e Birch trees fell. A lot of them did. I wouldn't want to be named after that!
The Snowkit story is heartbreaking! Poor kitty.
Keep writing, the Nightcloud one is really great! I used to hate her, but she grew on me. But I love Leafpool.
Keep going!
-Lavenderpaw

I feel so bad for Nightcloud and Breezepaw! I hate Crowfeather so much! And I agree, Leafpool is way too perfect!

This was written realisticlly and beautifully.

I also loved the SpiderWhite one. At Icenice I started laughing. Firestar has a mental problem.

Snowkits death made me cry. He was just a kitten!
~SR

Interesting! I never knew that Leafpool is so mean!

Snowkit... WA! And the moss ball.. I hope he gets to keep it in StarClan

That was... lacking.

You can't even spell Graystripe!

Nice! I'm not a NightcloudCrowfeather shipper, but I really liked this. I never thought about how Nightcloud would feel, I just hated her for taking Crowfeather when I desperately hoped he and Leafpool would get back together.

I agree about Leafpool though. In the books she just seemed so calm and certain, and then she left Crowfeather like he meant nothing to her. I thought it was way too self-sacrificing... 'kay, I'mm rambling now. *sends review*

Nice, but heartbreaking. Who do you think Nightcloud should be with- LIke, if you continued this story?

Leafpool would be a better character if she acted like that instead of the way she does. I realy dislike her. And Breezepaw is one of my faves. That was good.
-hugs you for shipping NightxCrow- I do too.
--Hope/

Zomg yes I HATE their names. Have you seen Dark River's sneak peek - In Outcast they name Berrypaw BerryNOSE! Ew... Firestar's got problems, clap, clap, clap clap clap, Firestar's got problems, clap, clap, clap clap clap... oh wait maybe I'm the one with the problmes. *shrug* ah well. Good stories! :)
--Rainey

LAWL,I was cracking up at Berryfather. xD I loved this chapter!

...I'm not sure that Whitewing is such a bad name. But I do think that it is awful to say that all that they represent is being in the hollow for a certian amount of time. And those names really are funny.

~~Ta~~