whoa neva expected that at the end.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!WHAT THE HECK?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Well. "Now I've heard everything," is pretty right. This was great! Hahahaha. I was reading it, going, aw! then I got the confession and was like, LOL! Really good work! I'm sorry if you really support this pair but I like it for laughs. Hehe.

LOL. XD

You know, if it wasn't for the warning "crackfic ahoy", I would've fallen even deeper into the trap than I already did. However, I noticed the signs. No mention of the words "she" or "her". :P

I actually got to thinking it was Brock for some reason XD but then Max popped up! Haha. Wasn't expecting HIM, for sure.

ravengal out x

HOLY **! That was hilarious! WhenI read "I love you, Max" I spat out the coke I was drinking and was like "OMGWTFBBQ?!?!?!"

ROFL! Great story! :D

Quite fluffy, if that's the appropiate word, but because it's my favorite pairing, I like it. Just a bit short, I might add.

Aw... Dark Angel loves The Pokemon Gym leader, too. And, that's not told in confusing subtext story.

It's amazing how seriously people can take stories like these...

I've kinda reviewed this on the PFU forums, but I never had a chance to read the other comments =O


I'd say this is easily some of the best fluff I've ever read... simply because I dislike fluff in general.

Although I definitely felt very disturbed as well.

"I've loved you for months." sent shivers down my spine.

It was good writing, but the pairing was not write. Sorry, that just not my style.

A new take on an old romance. O.o
*looks very carefully at the 'M' in AAML*
I'm never taking this abbreviation stuff lightly again unless they specify WHO.
O.o
O.o
This was majorly weird. O.o
*stares*
What the heck, I think you got my point. O.o

*Sigh* People gotta stop taking things so seriously, don't they see that this fic is in the HUMOR section? Geez. -.- Note that Max said in the fic that he wasn't a kid anymore.

I laughed, especially at what Brock said. xD It really reminded me of neogirl7900's fic, 'Gone'. Hehe, good job!

Well...honestly, I can't say that I personally like the shipping, but I ain't gonna say it's bad, since apparently, some people seem to like it. Well, either way, this story was kinda short, not to mention that there could've been a lot more put into it. If you're an AshxMax kind of person, then I guess I can't say anything about what caused you to write this. Oh, well. Other than shortness, it was okay.

Writing: A Passion of the Soul

OMG...SICKO...(ew) god i thought it was an Ash Misty.

..don't listen to Ghost. This short one-shot was awesome.

It caught me completely off-guard! Make more like these! (kudos to the crack pairing)

Ah, that was awesome. I especially love the last line--that made for a real perfect ending.

Although... there was actually the appearance of a pokémon in here! I mean, this is a romance 'fic in the pokémon section! There should be no mention of the creatures here!