I have recently become a fan of tsubasa and I must say that I absolutly LOVE your story! It will definately be posted as one of my favorites.-J

I prefer the fluffy ending, but I think the canon-one fits better into the story :b..

Good work

Wow. This was really well written. Good sentence structure, use of literary devices, and character interactions. Wow. :-)

I don't think I reviewed your story before, in any case it must be one of the best I've ever read
It's beautifully written and it's plot is catchy ((for the lack of a better word))

Personally, I loved both endings...though I have a soft spot for fluff

Keep up the good work!
-Viv

I loved your story in my opinion you should keep both endings on fanfic.

:D I friggen loved this story. Usually I don't like it when it's in first tense, but just like the author of my favorite series (The Dresden Files by Jim Butcher, READ IT!) your writing seems to suck me in. This was briliant and origional, and I loved Kimi and Kia ^_^ I think I liked the fluffy ending better, but that's just my inner fangirl speaking. It probably wouldn't happen. But with clamp you never know, so lets hope! *crosses fingers* Loved this a whole lot, write more KuroFai please!

That was possibly THE best story I've read! You are an AMAZING writer!

I loved it. Absolutely loved it. ^_^ First I thought "I'll just read one chapter per day, so I'll have something to do for a while." But I couldn't do it. XD I printed few chapters, 'cause I wanted to read them just before I started to sleep. I've read a lot of KuroFay lately, and this is one of the best fics. It's actually one of the best fics I've ever read (with any pairing), and I've read quite a few.

I read both endings. I liked the fluffy one better, but think the best would have been something from middle. Like Fai deciding that he won't tell Kurogane anything, but Kurogane sees through his lies. But it's just what I think, and I liked the both endings like they are, too. ^_^

I liked the way you write a lot. I like to write from characters point of view, but it isn't always easy. You managed it really well. What you could use is a good beta, and just to look out for spelling errors (I'm the best one to talk. X"D).

But still, thanks for the fic. I enjoyed it. ^_^

I love the fluff ending a lot better, simply because I can't stand seeing Kuro and Fai go through so much angst, finally reveal their love for each other, have one beautiful night together, and then have nothing but angst left until Kuro re-proves his point by cutting off his arm to save his dear Fai. HOWEVER...I totally had a dream last night about this ending (I've been soaking up your fanfics all day yesterday...totally procrastinated my homework too...resulted in my dreaming about KuroFai mwuahahah)...I dreamed that in Nihon, after Fai gives up and decides to let down his walls again, (This is payback, Kuro-sama!), Kurogane comes to Tomoyo-hime and asks her if she can show him what really happened in the Dynn world...I dreamed that Tomoyo-hime showed him with her powers, connecting Kuro-tan to one of Fai's nightmares during the night, and then Kuro has to spend time letting it all soak in - that he and Fai shared love, and then Fai risked everything to get his soul back, but pretended that his heart wasn't breaking when Kuro remembered nothing. And then he comes to Fai's room during the next night to confront him about it. Bwahahaha. Such a good dream. I thought briefly of writing it down, then realized that I would be stealing your own story just to make my own epilogue for it, LOL. So I stopped and continued MY fanfic instead. :3

It was a long search for me to find a good, complete, Fai-centric KuroFai adventure story! Drabbles are wonderful and all, but we also love Tsubasa for the action! And you delivered beautifully. I really liked your characterizations. I think "Captive" was my favorite chapter, you played that out REALLY well and it, along with the rest of the story and events, were very believeable. I also like the dual-endings. The canon one fits it perfectly into Infinity world and the fluffy one leaves it open for more (Who says they can't have more good times before Fai gets all "Kurogane" like in Infinity? ~_^) Overall, an AWESOME story. You had me gripped all throughout it and I really enjoyed reading. =^_^= Thank you!

I know you're probably long done with this...and not even bothering to read reviews for it anymore...XD

But I still want to tell you that I truly enjoyed it. It felt short, but that's good, since it's both a)quick and efficient and b)very neatly plotted (if you meant to plot it at all.)

Not just the story (because of all the kidnapped!KuroxFai fics are out there) but you write from Fai's pov very well, as if you understand him inside and out. Which, of course, you do by now. Character development there is fantastic. I think I've only read one other (that was a YnM fic) from a character's pov that was this well done.

Kudos to you, and thank you for the entertainment!

OMG Your story is AMAZING! I absolutely love your writing style. Personally, I liked the fluff ending better... ^^; though the Cannon ending was also well-written... I'm just a major Fai/Kurogane fan. To be honest, I'm sad it's the end. I really wish you would write more on it, but that, of course, is your decision and just one reader's opinion. Keep writing, even if it is another story, though, as you have an awesome talent!

This ending was SO much better than the canon. the canon makes me depressed. all of that only to get nowhere : ( but this ending truely fits your story : )

and this is officially my favorite trc fic ever!

I agree.
Fluff wins.
Canon-ish is so...canon. Eew. Smells like rotten potatoes. Okay, not that bad, canon did give us Kuro-pii and Fai-chan. But really, the canon ending was sad, and I'm in the mood for happy.
Therefore I vote this ending.
I really enjoyed this whole story. The first person present tense worked well for it - gave it a nice sense of immediacy.
Anyway, thanks for this.

Ohh! I loved this story! This is the first Tsubasa Chronical fanfic I've read. It's amazing! I liked how the other chapter ties in with the cannon, but I gotta say, this one I like more. It brings some closure to Fai and Kuro-chan's feelings. I hope you do a narration of the Celes arch. Their relationship in that one is very intreguing.