When I read "His" in that second paragraph I just lost it. I'm still laughing over it.

omg i can't stop laughing!!
i love it!
keep it up!!

and laugh i do oh god my sides hurt im laughign so hard!! that was awesome! that is what really will happen i swear in the series if CLAMP ever decides to continue the series hahaha

XD I loved this. All your works make me laugh and they are quite well written and you keep Kazahaya and Rikuo and everyone else in character! I always look forward to a new story or blurb from you about them! XD Keep writing!

I DIED laughing. That was SO great.

hiya, it's me, seizansha over at lj. just hoped over here to check out your fics and this is so damn funny! specially the end... 'bouquet of doom' roflmao

*cackles*
love it

Huhuhuhu I can SEE Rikuou's smirk! And I was just like him "Sure." XD And how can he (Kazahaya) say "Hell no" to Rikuou? I mean, just look at him *points at Rikuou* how can anyone say 'hell no' to HIM?? And of course: Bouquet of doom *grin*, Rikuou better hide it very well, I'm quite sure Kazahaya would just love to destroy the poor bouquet like it was some curse...XD This fic is really cute and funny! Thanx!

*snickers* Kazahaya needs to get laid...make that his punishment for saying "Hell no" to Rikuo XD

Bouquet of doom! xD

Very sweet. I love "the bouquet of doom".

Cute! I loved it!

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ooh... someone's gettin' married!

Okay, i was like 'aw...' I want something like that to happen to me too! You know, when the bride throws away the flowers and you catch it. It is so annoying... I've been like... a bride maid to a couple of weddings and I still haven't caught the bouquet!

But I was like shocked to read Nayuki was getting married I was like... oh, Kaza and Rikou getting it on! Hahahaha... They should get married... and then somewhere along the wedding, Kaza would be swept away by the wind to the pale that bled red on their wedding night. Tsukiko's revenge! LMAO!

Okay, ignore that. On to the real review (WHAT?? That wasn't the real review!?)

It's short,it is not anything near exaggerated and it is elegant. Very poignant in its simplicity and a bit of fluff at the end that makes a fan girl smile. It's sweet, very sweet like say... chocolate. Not very hard like hard candy and not spilling of fluff, like cotton candy.

(I'm eating Cadbury right now!)