Great story!

But I expected Fenrir Greyback to be a little more...vicious?

Yea...vicious.

But!

I still love your story.

Wow... Fenrir seems so...NICE. Thats...a nice change actually. You also captured Remus very well. Very well done! oh, and was this before fenrir joined voldemort? Cuz if he hadn't, that would explain why he is nice.

Aww... poor moony. He's my favorite character

I'm always imagining how exactly he got bitten, so it's nice seeing it in story form.

very descriptive! write more please!

maybe a sequel on how he gets home?

that was very cute :)

Another cool oneshot! Good job with characterization; young Remus is so cute.

Poor Remmy!

i liked it

wow loved it

Very interesting...I actually started to read "Journal of a Werewolf" but then noticed that it was the sequel to this, so I'm reading this first. Great job! I look forward to reading "Journal." Happy reading and writing!

Wow.. That was really good written! Smart little Remus

Sounds like the start of a great story. You may want to write about how Remus got back home and what his dad's reaction was like when he found out what happened to his son. Just a thought. Post soon.

Wow, that's really well written! So great. I love the line:

‘I’m Fenrir Greyback.’ The way he said it, Remus almost expected him to add, “Your worst nightmare.”

I had to laugh at that.