This was so... well, it took my breath away to say the least. It was beautiful and fluid and so many things were unsaid, hidden and described in such few words. That takes talent!

This was extraordiary! XD

I feel sorry for Aang D: But this is bloody brilliant. I love it.

this is the best fanfic i have ever read in my lifetime. i love you so much for writing this. it's perfect. it's amazing.

I don't know what amazes me more-- this completely EPIC fic or the fact that it doesn't have more reviews...

I loved it. It was SO FREAKING beautifully written and I thought it was gonna end on "Her Story," but it made my day when I realized that it didn't. :D

PLEASE WRITE MORE OHGAWD PLEASE.

(totally faving this bad boy.)

i wasn't sure about this at first... though now i like it? Got any more of em?

I would just like to say that these were very good.
However I think that this like is my favorite:

42. Bother

They're only a few days from shore now, standing in the bridge and watching the land approach; Katara idly mentions that Sokka will be waiting for them there; Zuko startles, blinking at her with sudden suspicion and asks if Sokka knows about Hassan - she's aware he's thinking of the last few years of companionship with her brother, but can't stop the look she gives him or the way she pats his cheek and adds, "It's a good thing you're handsome."

gigglesnort. Really really great job. :)

great story! very creative.

I do hope you keep at it, I hate when good stories don't get finished and I like this one a lot.

I love this story - especially the choice of the name Hassan. Very nice. :)

I also like how the fifty prompts for each chapter are the same, but the fifty-first changes.

Definitely one of the better fics on the site ;) A whole story told in fifty-one words.

I read this a while ago, and I'm glad that I found it again. This is really great! I'll be checking out for more.

i love this story
i read it on livejurnal and printed it out so i could read it when ever
i love it!

PS You might want to fix the formatting - the /i can be a little distracting. Darn ffnet and their lack of html support!

This was beautiful and artfully done.

Simply wonderful. It takes a lot of skill to weave a story with only a few words but you did it. I enjoyed it a lot.

Again, SO MUCH LOVE ZOMGMARRYMEANDHAVEMYBABIESPLZOHPLZDOMORESOON!

Jak

(who's totally adding this to her fav's list)