|Reviews for And The Rain|
| NarakuYugureHimitsu 4/16/07 . chapter 1
Grammar issues. Needs a few commas and what-not here and there, but the overall story itself I liked. Work on that gramma a bit, but keep those stories coming mate.
| sensual violence 3/6/07 . chapter 1
This is lovely, I'm glad I stumbled across this. I hope you write more of this ship :)