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SuperSaiyanTeemo 4/15/12 . chapter 46
NOOOOOOOO! Please consider finishing this amazing fanfiction, its not nice to end on a cliffhanger like that :( It seems so close to the end as well, at least tell us how it suppose to end if your not going to finish it
AshKetchumForever 5/16/11 . chapter 46
I love it! I wish that you could make more chapters. This quite an interesting fic.
Zeromaru1011 1/14/11 . chapter 46
This...Is the greatest story ever, though I wish you would Keep writing this fanfic.
Zeromaru1011 12/20/10 . chapter 45
No, No, NO! I won't let you end this story without completing it, It's so Great!
Cedric Bale 12/18/10 . chapter 46
Haaaah, was checking my list of fanfics for updates and randomly noticed the Updated day turned four years old today. Happy anniversary! :D ... :(
pokemaster101 11/26/10 . chapter 46
aw...may you please keep going? please?

this story is probably one of the greatest ones on the site. in my case, it is; and i've read a LOT of stories.

are you going to continue it? if you're not, give it to someone who will finish it. i know a few people who will.

please PM me back if you get the chance.

thank you.
Amaziug 7/12/10 . chapter 46
Wow... what has it been now? About 4 Years? -_-" But good story wonder if anyone addopted this story...
Questions 3/11/10 . chapter 46
Will Ash evolve to a full mew soon?
Requiem of Solace 2/8/10 . chapter 46
this chapter had this song playing in my head the entire time

If only tears could bring you back

How will I start

Tomorrow without you here

Who's heart will guide me

When all the answers disappear

Is it too late

Are you too far gone to stay

This one's forever

Should never have to go away

What will I do

You know I'm only half without you

How will I make it through

If only tears could bring you back to me

If only love could find a way

What I would do, what I would give

If you returned to me someday

Somehow, someway

If my tears could bring you back to me

I'd cry you an ocean

If you'd sail on home again

Wings of emotion

Will carry you, I know they can

Just light will guide you

And your heart will chart the course

Soon you'll be drifting

Into the arms of your true north

Look in my eyes

And you will see a million tears have gone by

And still they're not dry

If only tears could bring you back to me

If only love could find a way

What I would do, what I would give

If you returned to me someday

Somehow, someway

If my tears could bring you back to me

I hold you close

And shout the words I only whispered before

For one more chance, for one last dance

There's nothing that I would not give and more

If only tears could bring you back to me

If only love could find a way

What I would do, what I would give

If you returned to me someday

Somehow, someway

If my tears could bring you back to me
Dragono 12/27/09 . chapter 1
YOU PISS ME OFF DRAGONESS!I thought you would finish the greatest story on pokemon I ever read,and it still is an unfinished !
Cedric Bale 12/18/09 . chapter 46
Three years since this got updated last. Couple more years and it'll be as long between the last update and the current day as between the publishing date adn the last update. xD
xSapphirexRosesxFanx 11/22/09 . chapter 46
interesting story. Ash is passing a lot, i just hope he'll wake-up and everything will turn fine, like he'll return to his human form (all of his body) and if it is, let him have the powers. just not to make him sad and the rest. he really need happiness.

like he need Misty by his side. they r so ment to b, as his draw shows.

please UPDATE this story. and let the bad guys away for ever.

ASHxMISTY forever and happily ever after.

but, until then, i just want to read the rest of the chapters.

preet please!

;-)

i really like this story, it's a real work.

;-)
Dragono 11/22/09 . chapter 1
YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY!WaHa! It's so romantic and can't end like !
djfhldkjhglkajshflkjahslfkjhas 8/16/09 . chapter 46
this story is too good to go unfinished...

every since chapter 1 i've been completely and throughly addicted to reading this story...All of your stories are undescribably great, (especially Everything Changes and Making My Way) but this one has to be my favorite.

i really love the thought of human-pokemon evolutions. it really is a creative idea. and a mew...Ash certainly is blessed! although he might not think so.

The thought of Ash killing someone...its a scary thing to think about o.o but you've portrayed it so perfectly and really kept the characters "in character" given the situation.

really...i know almost every other review that you get says this but, i'm going to say it anyway.

please update. this story is too great to go abandoned. Good Luck. x.
hamishwarfare 7/25/09 . chapter 46
This story is simply too amazing to stop there! everything in this is just packed with so much emotion that i can't stand the thought of it just finishing there. I hardly slept while reading this!

You must be tired of hearing this request, but PLEASE start updating again! Or give us some idea of when you might start up again.

If only she could hear me...If i waited long enough...If i wish with all my heart...If only...

If only...
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