YOU PISS ME OFF DRAGONESS!!I thought you would finish the greatest story on pokemon I ever read,and it still is an unfinished masterpiece.FRICK!

Three years since this got updated last. Couple more years and it'll be as long between the last update and the current day as between the publishing date adn the last update. xD

interesting story. Ash is passing a lot, i just hope he'll wake-up and everything will turn fine, like he'll return to his human form (all of his body) and if it is, let him have the powers. just not to make him sad and the rest. he really need happiness.
like he need Misty by his side. they r so ment to b, as his draw shows.
please UPDATE this story. and let the bad guys away for ever.
ASHxMISTY forever and happily ever after.
but, until then, i just want to read the rest of the chapters.
preet please!
;-)
i really like this story, it's a real work.
;-)

YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY!WaHa!! It's so romantic and can't end like this.PLEASE!

this story is too good to go unfinished...

every since chapter 1 i've been completely and throughly addicted to reading this story...All of your stories are undescribably great, (especially Everything Changes and Making My Way) but this one has to be my favorite.

i really love the thought of human-pokemon evolutions. it really is a creative idea. and a mew...Ash certainly is blessed! although he might not think so.

The thought of Ash killing someone...its a scary thing to think about o.o but you've portrayed it so perfectly and really kept the characters "in character" given the situation.

really...i know almost every other review that you get says this but, i'm going to say it anyway.

please update. this story is too great to go abandoned. Good Luck. x.

This story is simply too amazing to stop there! everything in this is just packed with so much emotion that i can't stand the thought of it just finishing there. I hardly slept while reading this!

You must be tired of hearing this request, but PLEASE start updating again! Or give us some idea of when you might start up again.

If only she could hear me...If i waited long enough...If i wish with all my heart...If only...

If only...

"If he could hear me…If I waited long enough…If I wished with all my heart……If only……

If only…"

I don't think he ever will at this rate. D:

PLEASE UPDATE! I really want to know if Ash wakes up, but seeing as you haven't updated in three years, I'm really doubting you will. But please!

BEST...STORY...EVER! It's ashame its not likely to be finished. Thats what happens though, our lives move on, we forget things. It's the way life works. I wish they would finish it though.

Dude... WTF? I'm so confused right now. Is Giovanni his dad or something? I cant remember if Giovanni is the one with the earth badge. And what the hell does his dad have to do with his nightmares? Why am I asking you these questions when all I can really do at this point is just to keep on soldiering on and catch up to chapter 46. Wow, this was the most pointless review ever.

One year, one week, and one day since your last chapter got posted. This next chapter must be really long. :O Lol, but yeah, hope you do eventually continue this 'fic and that nothing bad happened to keep you from writing. Merry day-after-christmas! :D

Hello! This story is very good, though it is on a something of a hiatus from what i can tell, and as i am a recent reader i will leave this brief review in honor of it.
Honestly, this is very well written, and in my favorite style, the rare and elusive first person. Aside from the complex and unwavering plot, character development, and tragedy, i have been most impressed by how true to the characters i feel you are. Pokemon is a great world with so much that can be done for it, and in Fanfictions i get to see the maturity and depth i always longed for in the shows and got in minor details in the manga. You have done a very admirable job, in my opinion, of both granting the characters that depth and realistic maturity as well as maintaining the characteristics that make them them.
I will wrap up by saying that you are a very good author, and that this was the first Pokemon fanfiction i ever read, so it will have a special place in my memory. Should you ever up-date, i will be sure to read it, and until then i will work on my own stories.

hurry up and update. I want to find out if Ash ever wakes up and what is happening inside his mind.

Hurry back Dragoness, your loyal fans are missing you. starting to wonder if your even still alive. your stories are amazing, I love them more than the tv show now. Hurry Back Dragoness-Sama

I really hope you haven't abandoned this fic because it really is too good to discontinue... This is probably the third time I've read the entire series (and its taken me a few days to do so) but it's just as good it was the first time around. It's one of my favorite stories of all time (and I mean out of ALL fandoms) and I really miss not knowing what's gonna happen to poor Ash... :)