 sisterpatrick 2009-04-14 . chapter 1This is brilliantly done. Your Sand is perfect, and the timing couldn't be better. I love how you've kept his research methods at the forefront of his mind while he has a parallel conversation with the KC. My only problem is, I work in a library and have been snarfing my own laughter...I think my sinuses have imploded. What an hysterical story. Excellent! |
 callalili 2008-08-03 . chapter 1This made me laugh so hard my mother came from all the way across the house to give me a funny look. Great story, great characterization of Sand (always how I imagined him!), and awesome dialogue. |
 slef 2008-07-26 . chapter 1LOLOLOL! So cool! |
 CrayonMentality 2008-06-10 . chapter 1I hurt myself laughing, this is brilliant. |
 Falco 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Beautiful. You use perspective expertly in creating Sand's wry inner voice. The story is balanced and hugely entertaining, just like the elf himself. I think you write Sand better than the actual NWN2 writers did - unlike them, you keep up his flow of sarcasm without it ever seeming strained. I wish I could write half so well as you. |
 stellaria11 2007-11-29 . chapter 1This is excellent. You have Sand's 'voice' down pat and the comment about dressing up as a Wendersnaven made me laugh. It's a pity there are so many fics about the terminally boring paladin and not the bitchy, world-weary elf. So this is refreshing. |
 Cro-Magnon 2007-11-26 . chapter 1I saw that this was in my favourites list, but I had been remiss in reviewing it.
I think I'll echo what ryoushi-x said: "I loved the dialogue you gave Sand. I could hear him perfectly in my head and that's how I know it's character-perfect speech." That's my benchmark as to perfect character depiction too: those scary voices in my head. In your case, they rang true.
A great read that also made me smile, chuckle and laugh at times. |
 ClicktoFree 2007-09-01 . chapter 1I think I cracked a rib laughing too much...^^' XD |
 Archangel Beth 2007-07-05 . chapter 1 *giggle* I don't even know that pack of characters, and it's still amusing as heck. Pointy ears! |
 Estelindis 2007-06-14 . chapter 1What a wonderful piece of writing! You got Sand perfect: what he said, the way he said it, timing, etc. Wonder what joke he'll suggest to Casavir... ;o) |
 Alya Elvawiel 2007-02-07 . chapter 1Sand was perfect! Well done! |
 ryoushi-x 2007-01-21 . chapter 1I loved the dialogue you gave Sand. I could hear him perfectly in my head and that's how I know it's character-perfect speech. Well done! I also loved how you wove in the other characters as well and gave them each their own unique traits, and flavor. |
 Riana1 2007-01-05 . chapter 1I laughed myself sick. This simply rocked. |
 Krazed Kaioshin Fangirl 2007-01-04 . chapter 1Another darling work. :)
You have a real knack for writing Sand. I laughed at this, too, thoroughly entertained by the great sarcasm and how perfectly you've captured that elf's mind. And I love that you worked in his whole sniffing people bit. I get a giggle at how he seems to smell not only physical aspects of a person, but something more soulful as well.
I'm babbling now. |
 Sabella 2006-12-26 . chapter 1Intelligently written with a smart, sharp flair for comedy. Bravo!
Splendidly entertaining, DarthAmmonite. I laughed out loud with your spot-on portrayal of Sand's 'keen' wit. I hope we will see more of your finely-honed quill. :)
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