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sisterpatrick
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
This is brilliantly done. Your Sand is perfect, and the timing couldn't be better. I love how you've kept his research methods at the forefront of his mind while he has a parallel conversation with the KC. My only problem is, I work in a library and have been snarfing my own laughter...I think my sinuses have imploded. What an hysterical story. Excellent!
callalili
2008-08-03 . chapter 1
This made me laugh so hard my mother came from all the way across the house to give me a funny look. Great story, great characterization of Sand (always how I imagined him!), and awesome dialogue.
slef
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
LOLOLOL! So cool!
CrayonMentality
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
I hurt myself laughing, this is brilliant.
Falco
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
Beautiful. You use perspective expertly in creating Sand's wry inner voice. The story is balanced and hugely entertaining, just like the elf himself. I think you write Sand better than the actual NWN2 writers did - unlike them, you keep up his flow of sarcasm without it ever seeming strained. I wish I could write half so well as you.
stellaria11
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
This is excellent. You have Sand's 'voice' down pat and the comment about dressing up as a Wendersnaven made me laugh. It's a pity there are so many fics about the terminally boring paladin and not the bitchy, world-weary elf. So this is refreshing.
Cro-Magnon
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
I saw that this was in my favourites list, but I had been remiss in reviewing it.

I think I'll echo what ryoushi-x said: "I loved the dialogue you gave Sand. I could hear him perfectly in my head and that's how I know it's character-perfect speech." That's my benchmark as to perfect character depiction too: those scary voices in my head. In your case, they rang true.

A great read that also made me smile, chuckle and laugh at times.
ClicktoFree
2007-09-01 . chapter 1
I think I cracked a rib laughing too much...^^' XD
Archangel Beth
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
*giggle* I don't even know that pack of characters, and it's still amusing as heck. Pointy ears!
Estelindis
2007-06-14 . chapter 1
What a wonderful piece of writing! You got Sand perfect: what he said, the way he said it, timing, etc. Wonder what joke he'll suggest to Casavir... ;o)
Alya Elvawiel
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
Sand was perfect! Well done!
ryoushi-x
2007-01-21 . chapter 1
I loved the dialogue you gave Sand. I could hear him perfectly in my head and that's how I know it's character-perfect speech. Well done! I also loved how you wove in the other characters as well and gave them each their own unique traits, and flavor.
Riana1
2007-01-05 . chapter 1
I laughed myself sick. This simply rocked.
Krazed Kaioshin Fangirl
2007-01-04 . chapter 1
Another darling work. :)

You have a real knack for writing Sand. I laughed at this, too, thoroughly entertained by the great sarcasm and how perfectly you've captured that elf's mind. And I love that you worked in his whole sniffing people bit. I get a giggle at how he seems to smell not only physical aspects of a person, but something more soulful as well.

I'm babbling now.
Sabella
2006-12-26 . chapter 1
Intelligently written with a smart, sharp flair for comedy. Bravo!

Splendidly entertaining, DarthAmmonite. I laughed out loud with your spot-on portrayal of Sand's 'keen' wit. I hope we will see more of your finely-honed quill. :)

~s~
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