Reviews for One Lousy Joke

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slef 2008-07-26 ch 1,	abuseLOLOLOL! So cool!
CrayonMentality 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseI hurt myself laughing, this is brilliant.
Falco 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. You use perspective expertly in creating Sand's wry inner voice. The story is balanced and hugely entertaining, just like the elf himself. I think you write Sand better than the actual NWN2 writers did - unlike them, you keep up his flow of sarcasm without it ever seeming strained. I wish I could write half so well as you.
stellaria11 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is excellent. You have Sand's 'voice' down pat and the comment about dressing up as a Wendersnaven made me laugh. It's a pity there are so many fics about the terminally boring paladin and not the bitchy, world-weary elf. So this is refreshing.
Cro-Magnon 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abuseI saw that this was in my favourites list, but I had been remiss in reviewing it. I think I'll echo what ryoushi-x said: "I loved the dialogue you gave Sand. I could hear him perfectly in my head and that's how I know it's character-perfect speech." That's my benchmark as to perfect character depiction too: those scary voices in my head. In your case, they rang true. A great read that also made me smile, chuckle and laugh at times.
ClicktoFree 2007-09-01 ch 1,	abuseI think I cracked a rib laughing too much...^^' XD
Archangel Beth 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abusegiggle I don't even know that pack of characters, and it's still amusing as heck. Pointy ears!
Estelindis 2007-06-14 ch 1,	abuseWhat a wonderful piece of writing! You got Sand perfect: what he said, the way he said it, timing, etc. Wonder what joke he'll suggest to Casavir... ;o)
Alya Elvawiel 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseSand was perfect! Well done!
ryoushi-x 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseI loved the dialogue you gave Sand. I could hear him perfectly in my head and that's how I know it's character-perfect speech. Well done! I also loved how you wove in the other characters as well and gave them each their own unique traits, and flavor.
Riana1 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseI laughed myself sick. This simply rocked.
Krazed Kaioshin Fangirl 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseAnother darling work. :) You have a real knack for writing Sand. I laughed at this, too, thoroughly entertained by the great sarcasm and how perfectly you've captured that elf's mind. And I love that you worked in his whole sniffing people bit. I get a giggle at how he seems to smell not only physical aspects of a person, but something more soulful as well. I'm babbling now.
Sabella 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseIntelligently written with a smart, sharp flair for comedy. Bravo! Splendidly entertaining, DarthAmmonite. I laughed out loud with your spot-on portrayal of Sand's 'keen' wit. I hope we will see more of your finely-honed quill. :) ~s~
Hekateras 2006-12-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is simply hilarious! You won't believe how much I laughed reading this. ^^ And all the dialogues are spot-on, as well. It's fantastic how you got Sand so right...
Maid Of Many Names 2006-12-16 ch 1,	abuseYou have my undying gratitude for this! It is so nice to see some NWN2 fanfiction! Even better is that it was witty and well written. Sand is deliciously in character and his scathing tongue is utilized brilliantly. You also summed up many of the shortcomings of the NWN2 romances in a very enjoyable manner. The Casavir romance was almost nonexistent and the Bishop romance, while very interesting, was never very comfortable and didn't not resolve well. I'm not certain if you've considered a sequel but I really would love to see Casavir try and tell a joke. Then again, that might break him :)

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