This is an interesting idea, one of the better ones definatly. It would be wonderful if you would be able to update.
I know that it's hard to pick up a story that you haven't so much as glanced at for over two years, but if you have a brainwave; know that there are readers eagerly waiting to see if you cancmplete this story.

No presure!

You really should continue this fanfiction. It's really enjoyable so far and I am eager to see where it goes. Keep up the good work! :)

intresting update

Good chapter...I liked it.
Just to tell you Americans don't call it the states we call it America so idk...but...ya...
For your next story I like 'Simulated Love' just because i like the sims, Starfire- Warrior Princess and That Shrinking Feeling.
In order from:
Starfire - Warrior Princess
That Shrinking Feeling
and Simulated Love.
InkGothical

Hmm...I like what you told that Terra lover person. So true. I like it so far, but coudld you add a little more detail though? It seems like too short. Then again I sometimes do that but yeah. :P Anyway, I like it keep updating.

I don't care much for the language, but the idea is intriguing. I'll be watching for your next update. :)

screw the apology the update was enough (sighs ) thank you I can breath again

Great story. goin in my favs.

Okay, now I'm intrigued. A good start, though since it's only the first chapter I can't really say whether or not I think it's a good story. Still, it seems to be an interesting plot that is not only original but could definitely have some great possiblities. Plus it's about my favorite couple, and you (unlike many people) are actually able to spell. :D

Looking foward to the next chapter!

please please update!! i love it so far! i can't wait for a new chapter! Great plot line!

I'm finally reviewing for a story you wrote!
Wow, this doesn't suck, this is a great idea...the question is how can you progress it.
Could you possibly e-mail (not pm) me the link to that website you looked up the names on? I'm thinking about writing an AU myself...I've tried like...THREE openings.
InkGothical saying UPDATE

ow. i love it keep up the good work plz :-D.

Interesting. It looks like this has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see where it goes.

OMG! I love this story please update really soon.

GASP!! will they have to KIDNAP HER? OMG!@! =O iam lovin it lol keep it up!