A truely beautiful story! I LOVE happy endings!

a truly coolio story!

LOVE the story...except dakari...anyways a song idea is

Train - Drops of Jupiter

and yes corny song but it is a great love song...my fav love song

This story was amazing. I think I had started reading it a while back but got a lil...busy. sorry. I loved it though. lol I think I've read most of your stories now. Can't help it. Your such a great writer!

Hi! Aw, it's over? Gee, I haven't reviewed for this in awhile. I'm so glad that Takuya won in the end and that he and Zoey can be together. Zoey and Kari showing up at the battle to help their guys was kind of sweet. Who knew Kari could fight so well with a sword. I loved the part when Takuya was talking to Jesus in his mind. It seemed so meaningful. And the reference to the Sword in the Stone was neat too. Does that mean that Takuya's sword was Excalibur? Pretty cool. Well, happy ending. This was a really enjoyable story. Good job! Well, good luck with your other stories and I'll cya around. Ciao! _

Wow! I'll add this to favorite! Thanks for writing it! :D

lol credits..

AH! I LOVED IT! IT WAS SO WONDERFUL! great job!

wha, what! NO! TAKUYA CAN'T BE GONE! *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB* *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB* *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB* *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB* *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB* *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB* *SOB**SOB**SOB**SOB*

*sniff* ok, i'm good. well, great chapter though! this was really good.! update soon.

Please

up date soon this is my Most fav couple ever!Oh and I really like T.k and Kari together better than Davis and finsh the story Please!

It's half a cliffhanger... And soo short...

Great! she's coming!

Awesome story!

Hi! Well, this is getting interesting. The relationship between Takuya and Zoey is going along nicely. Their walk through the king's garden and their kiss was so sweet. I really hpoe that they can be together and that King Norman survives too. The battle with the Fire Herons was really exciting. It's too bad that the Kingdom nearly lost. But maybe they'll devise a straegy to win the next time. There's only one thing that I'm wondering. What place is this story set in? It seems to be a mix of "Eragon" and "The Lord of the Rings". There's some similar things to "Eragon" (as I mentioned before), and similar creatures to that in "The Lord of the Rings". Interesting. Well, I wonder what is going to happen now. Please continue again real soon. Cya then! _

wow, very dramatic. i don't know how you do it, but wow! update soon please! :)