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ziggy.uk
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
Loved this fic, so funny! Could so imagine both boys being determined to finish the ginormous burgers because they would then be free and they had no cash or cards to pay for them anyway! Typical of Dean to finish first and be surrounded by impressed restaurant employees leaving Sam, who also finished his, getting no attention for his feat at all. Not at all surprised that Dean had to stop the car for Sam to puke and that he rubbed in the fact that Sam would be having cold showers and listening to Zeppelin for the next three weeks! At least Sam had the last word, he would be handling the cards in future and probably the last laugh too as he had purged himself of his burger, Deans would be working its way through his body and eventually out the other end!
Bunny1
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Aw, cute and funny!
Bundibird
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
Lol - i can SO see this happening!! I loved it! hilarious.

"might not be so hard after all."

...

"I cant do it."

Priceless.

Bundi
sudoku
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
LOL, really really good. Is there really a diner like that?
tanpopo no hana
2008-01-22 . chapter 1
Hilarious. But believe it or not, it made me really hungry!
Rat
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
eww, but an entertaining eww
luvjase
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
Man, this was Funny! LOVED the banter. Poor Sammy. Cold showers are not fun. Thanks. Love your work.
x.Sofia-t.x
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
HAHA! Finally a bit of humour on these fan fics, you've proved it doesnt have to be all drama and tears! thanks for the chuckle xsofiax
MeShelly
2007-07-07 . chapter 1
Fun. :) Great interaction between the two, as usual. I like that you've intertwined their financial strain (and 'magazine' fixes) with the "eat this impossibly large portion and it's free" scenario. Makes it seem molded to their world.

~Michelle
Sarah G
2007-05-31 . chapter 1
This was hilarious! I absolutely loved the banter going on...
“I’m going to vomit.”
“You vomit and I win.”
“What if I die?”
“I still win.”

“This, for instance. This is crazy, you know that? I read once where you can actually die from over-eating.”
“Yet here you are.”

“Fifty dollars says tomorrow we have heart attacks and die.”
“Dude, if you have fifty dollars, we wouldn’t be doing this.”

Brilliant!
Rebel Goddess
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
That reminded me of a John Candy film where he had to eat the biggest steak you've ever seen, gristle and all. I can't believe they ate the whole thing. That was impressive. Excellent idea.
j
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
i couldent stop giggling i mean it i physicaly couldent stop giggling which kinda sucks cause people can hear me ( i have a very loud laugh) i really enjoyed this it will keep me laughing in front of people i dont know for days to come.stand proud because of this story i will be cracking up in class or on buses and getting more weird looks than i have in my life.excilent job.
Rinne
2007-01-08 . chapter 1
Hilarious!
Windyfontaine
2006-12-22 . chapter 1
Totally loved this!! And I had burgers last night...think I'll have some again today :) Lol, this was great, but you already knew that. I'd quote what I liked the most, but then I'd have to quote the whole thing. Thanks for the lighthearted fic, needed it amongst all the angst. Hope you have a wonderful day!
bubblesquirt
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
“I’m going to vomit.”

“You vomit and I win.”

“What if I die?”

“I still win.”

...

this fic was too cute. great job!
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