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| chili-peppers 2007-12-08 ch 24, | abuseOmg! beautiful ending! Im soo gutted this has finished :( I've really enjoyed reading this,I love reading all your fics. Great work :D |
| Susan1302 2007-11-23 ch 24, | abuseI'm kinda sad this story ended. But I think it's a bit weird that Lauren gave Charlotte to Stella. I understand that she was too young to raise a baby but what would Danny and Lindsay think? Poor Danny and Lindsay, is Lauren moving all the way to Rome. "So that nerdy guy who used to come over for Christmas was my real dad?" I couldn't stop lauging after reading that. Over all I really loved the story. It was really good. I liked the part before Lauren grew up the best. I don't really know why. I also liked that this was a serieus fic. With the whole Lindsay drama, Danny couldn't see his daughter being born (so sad by the way) and Lauren being deaf etc. That was about it. Hugs Susan Ps. Really like Uptown Girl so far! |
| fatkat 2007-11-14 ch 24, | abuseThat was so beautiful. The story was woven so well, with both big and little steps. Keep up the excellent work and I'll be watching for that new fic you promised :) Much D/L love Fatkat |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-11-14 ch 24, | abuseYAY! Hey, awesome ending. I think the way everything turned out was perfect. I was very curious to wonder how Charlotte was going to react to being adopted...Any chance we can get an itty-bitty oneshot on how Lauren met Lucas? Well, I can dream, anyway. "Uptown Girl" sounds like a great story, can't wait to see it! NIce job, Michaela! |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-11-13 ch 23, | abuseI am SO glad to see another chapter of this story! Totally worth the wait. I love the dynamics you have between Charlotte and Lauren and the Flack family. The first day of school is one of those days you always remember, so...yeah, I can totally understand Flack and Stella's frustration. Sending the photo was a nice touch. May your plot bunnies come back from vacation ready to think up some more! Glad to see this one up and running again! |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-09-08 ch 22, | abuse*SO* worth the wait. Lots of mixed emotion in this chapter. I loved it. It's nice to see how you moved the situation with Flack and Stella along. It's a good jumping off point, having them all move in together. I would LOVE to see all these pictures that were taken :) Can't wait to see another new chapter of this... |
| chili-peppers 2007-07-16 ch 21, | abuseWow! The Last two chapters were awesome! Pregnant! I loved the way you wrote Danny and Lindsay's reaction to the news. And i loved that she gave the baby to Stella! And i love the baby's name. I just love it all! Great writing :D |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-07-14 ch 21, | abuseAbsolutely PERFECT. This was awesome. I loved this chapter. Baby girl Bonasera's name is beautiful. Charlotte-Lindsay Renee. So cute. I know where the Lindsay and Renee come from...but I don't remember Charlotte. Did I miss the significance somewhere? Anyway...I loved it. Just...just great. I can totally see Stella being a mom, she'd be SO good at it! |
| LiaBelle 2007-07-14 ch 21, | abuselove the idea of giving the baby to stella! good job! |
| Bichonmom 2007-07-13 ch 21, | abuseJust a quick question. What the hell happened to the cochlear implants? |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-07-11 ch 20, | abuseWell. Huh. This should go over well! She's 15...he's 18... Yeah, Danny'll be thrilled about this one. How fast can Charlie run...how FAR can Charlie run? Loved the update, can't wait for more! |
| abbeguytje 2007-07-11 ch 20, | abuseOMG! please update soon I just can't wait to know what danny's reaction is gonna be! |
| LiaBelle 2007-07-11 ch 20, | abuseoh boy. this is gonna be interesting! |
| probysgirl 2007-07-11 ch 20, | abuseOps! Teehee! Danny's gonna flip out! teehee! Katy :-) |
| Bluehaven4220 2007-07-10 ch 20, | abuseupdate and update soon! WOW. Lauren's pregnant? oh wow. more please |