Holy crap. I started crying...mind you, I'm still sitting here at work. That was amazing...and beautiful...despite Abby dying. When Carter started talking about his brother and what Bobby told him about not being afraid, I started to cry.


I can't believe I didn't read this last year!! My name is in this story and everything! ROFL! How slow am I?


But I'm here now! hehehehe


Great job!

~mandi *_*

Aww! I Love It!

I loved it..

I'm so sorry for taking so long to read. I'll explain it in an e-mail.

You did a great job using one fantastice Poem by Kate.

Wow, essy this is amazing. No words can escribe the emotions that I feel. It was so dark and depressing, so sad, yet it was so beautiful. The entire meaning of each and everyword that you wrote was so beautiful. Just like a simple snowflake.

You had be sobbing practically as I read this. You were so true to everything in this. And whether you continue to write or not, I will always be here. You know that's the truth.

I love you so much carina and I'm thankful for everything you've helped me get through.

ok am crying now, thanks for that!

*cries*
wow...just..wow. that was an amazing story..i loved it. but it made me cry..*cries some more*

It was wonderful and different from anything else I have ever read of the ER stories! Great Job!

NM

This is just so, so beautiful. This story is far better than anything I could have ever imagined for my poem... You've added so much to it and made it FAR better than anything I could have ever though up on my own. And for that I thank you :)

The sentence and paragraph structure, the amazing wording, the moment when it truly sinks in that she's about to die (which brought tears to my eyes)... it's all so beautifully written. My new favorite story :)

Thank you for something so sad but so amazing :)

~ Kate

That was... incredibly sad. I think if I were a Carby shipper, instead of a Luby shipper, I would've cried. Nice job.

OMG thats soo sad.

I can truthfully say that I cried. That was so touching.

My god that was so incredibly heartbreaking.
Beautiful, in a sick sort of way. ; )

Its really sad. Im going to print it out so I can read it again. I think you covered anything, good job.

Im just curious, where in Chicago are you? or is this kind of an AU?

Aw. That was sad. I cried

*sobs* Why, why, did I have to read that?