I liked the being of the story the whole walking the battleground and it was certainly dark but the snapes wand threw me at the end. It would make more sense if we knew if he was protecting harry or how exactly voldemort was killed but those 3 spells don't seem to be enough

Wow. That was really interesting and very descriptive. I am wondering though how three Protegos defeated Voldemort though. I think you need a little more around that to clarify it. Or maybe Harry's wand is the one that defeated Voldemort and Harry's legs gave away at the Protego's because that means that he didn't cast any curses?

You need to fix the line breaks of this story. Right now there raen't any spaces between the paragraphs. You end a sentence and then go to the next line. You have to either have a space between the lines, or you need to move the sentence back up.

Thanks for sharing!

It's a pity that this is a one-shot, because this could serve beautifully as a prelude to a post-war story, where everyone picks up the pieces.

Lovingly written, although I'm not certain that you got the spacing that you wanted.

Well done!

Horribly sad, but very well written.

Im adding this story to my favourite list, because it's wonderful! Keep up the good work. :)