Very well done. Though some of the grammar is a bit...off. Like Ami's reply of 'I am' to Makoto asking 'Do you want to continue?' does not compute. Makes me wonder if English is your first language. ; But the feelings come through the grammar errors, so you're redeemed. _-

nice email me plz if ya still write ot email me anywayz if u even go on this site anymore

You know,i don't know how my twisted mind works but I actually thought it was Mamoru,I was then again,I think everyone is Mamoru:O)

thanks for Loving me.

Love ya for wrighting that beautiful fic

Great fic! I loved the way you didn't tell us who it was until the end. I liked the song too! Everly Brothers - I'll Do My Crying In The Rain is an oldie, but a goodie! I LOVE songfics and I hope to see more work from you.

You stole my word! Anywho is my word! I use it all d time... but i guess u didn't know that_ by the way... wat's a 'Urawa' ? great story... and d song in d front is a good touch! nice work!

I loved the way you held off on revealing the partner till the end. Awesome.