This is pretty good.
It's been months but it would be cool if you updated.

Kim S., to me, seems like a well-rounded character.
Nice job.

hey that was really good

plz update soon

I didn't really think that she would be so forgiving. I'm kinda like that too. If he says sorry, then I would be okay with that.
(Hey, I didn't rape her.) (Really...) T.T I'm kidding!
UPDATE!
I'm sorry for the fight scenes. You really didn't have to go into so much details.

Loved the action! You're really good at writing action stories. Writing down fights is just not my thing. I tried once and my friend got lost after 'she began with a left hook punch' Great, i'm depressed now. Oh, well! I liked the way it ended, since some stories goes on and on and on and just don't stop til they run out of ideas. Also, this has much detail and i can really picture it. This may help me on my next action story. UPDATE!

OMG.OMG! Ok, don't ask. This chapter was just uber-cool! Make it longer and make the next a bit longer. Like 5 pages longer. LOL! Kidding! The next should have lots and lots of action, like how Sarang kicks their **. Them ganging up on her is just wrong. not pervy wrong, but you get it. i personally don't like cliff hangers so update as soon as possible, plz!

aw this is just like those drama's i watch. it's so awesome. that was just so cool. Maybe so other guy can start liking her and they begin to date, but hwoarang gets jealous and feels the ned to act like her protector

Interesting chapter... this is what i hate about whores and **. they're always jealous and all girly-like and are soo annoying and always complain about the rest of the sane girls about this and that and blah! About the chapter, i really glad that Sarang punched that ** i mean, that's what i would've done. I don't think i told you this before, but you're a really good writer. unlike me, sigh. oh well! I think sarang shows most of her personalities in this chapter. she's the kind of person who's really sweet on the outside, but shouldn't be messed with whether you're a ** or not. Hwoarang...is an idiot. i understand why he took her away but jeez! UPDATE!

Awesome im hooked on this story

This chapter was pretty good! You should make it longer though. Thr idea of a four-year runaway sounds pretty vague, but it sounds really cool. I would've done that if I were her. Except I would go to Mongolia or somewhat to train instead of China. But they study the best martial arts there, so she had a good reason. UPDATE SOON!

I hope they do not get caught material things must not mean that much to her.

Sweet. I loved this chapter too. I use korean sayings and words all the time so Im not confused by any of this. I used to call my mother oomah. I always told her that I loved her in korean. Just keep up the good work.

Now she will live with Hwoarang lol anyway update.

Lookin' good! (Shrieks) Hwoarang's soo hot! Enough of the craziness. Anyways, I love the way you create you OC's. I should do that. Hmm... Maybe on "Killing Jin Kazama". All I could say is update update update!

loved the fic!

Aunyoung!
Interesting story...Soobin is kinda strange, but I don't blame her. Her name is kinda weird too. Ah! Never mind I take that back. I'm not Korean myself, I'm Japanese so I shouldn't be talking! Sorry... Anyways! In the next chapter, don't forget to have him flick off that guy again!