What? No! Grr! Where's the sequel... part 3? Have you written it yet? Cause if you have, I can't find it. Please let me know. Oh, great job, by the way.

Mako is a fool. this is a very well paced and believable story. unlike so many other storys, even though it was still short the progression of the relationship took time and was'nt just a instant thing. definantly this authors best work... so far

Looking good so far. Now on to the next part!_