good story

Can we have like another chaptor like. i mean i need and warm bottled spring water from the caladanian mountains, so like can you like step on it like ^.^

lol

please thry to improve your grammer and the typos are ** me off!

this is good

COME ON, DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING, I WANT TO KNOW WHO THE HELL THE DARK PERSON IS, IS IT SAKURA, COMING TO KILL NARUTO (likely), OR IS IT MAYBE SASUKE, COMING TO KILL NARUTO, (once again, likely), MAYBE IT'S EVEN THE OWNER OF ICHIRAKU RAMEN, COMING TO KILL HIS NUMBER ONE CUSTOMER FOR SAYING THEIR RAMEN ISN'T THE BEST. (Likely, man Naruto makes a lot of enemies doesn't he?) Keep writing, don't just abandon this story, please

Seems like we're never gonna find out who that figure who stepped in. huh? Because its been --god knows when-- since you last uploaded! Seriously Rukia, upload soon!

Gaara-l0ve

Good job! Only one little problem. Didn't you forget to send Hinata on that mission? 0.o lol, coz Naruto woke up early to give Hinata flowers, and then he ate breakfast, and now there going sumwhere and it seems its late already? Keep it up tho! XD

nice..is there a next chapter??

I would have enjoyed this much more if i hadn't been fighting to make the powercord work...lol but you're a lot better at this than I am. Check out my fics, they all Naruhina!

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! I really enjoyed each and every bit of this story! although I was a little annoyed at all the "sorry" and "blush" but it was just AWESOME! Hurry up with ch.21 ! I can't wait OMG! Rukia you're awesome!

I wonder who it is? Keep up the good work.

Keep up the great work.

so far pretty good and... do u watch avatar cuz part of the scene reminded me of one of the episodes

A really nice story so far. I love the pairing, and your doing an amazing job with it. I'm trying to develop the same pairing in my own story, so I know it's not easy. My only complaint is with the "cutie" nickname. It seems too much like a grade school nickname. Also it seems to be used way too often in the dialogue. Other than that, a great story, and I look forward to the next chapter.

P.S. Sakura plays an important role in my story as well in terms of their relationship

AWE! i don't want it to END! D`: