 emi131995 2009-11-30 . chapter 1I absolutely LOVE this story. It was absolutely heartbreaking when Jordan had to stay on Oban while the rest of the Earth Team had to leave, but you made their coupling possible!! Love it x100,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0 ♥ ☺! |
 Ichigo-Eyes 2009-08-20 . chapter 1Wow, Out of all the Eva/Jordan fics I've read, this is probably the best 'Jordan returns' fic! You did a great job keeping it short and sweet! |
 Annie C. 2009-05-29 . chapter 1 This was beautifully written! And I loved that closing line- how clever! ^_^ |
 alphawolfnami 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Aw.. I really liked how you make Jordan appear not in his avatar state, but more of the gunner boy he was inside.. TT^TT So cute! |
 stardogs 2007-07-11 . chapter 1i loved it.
write other storyes like this please |
 Holly Lawliet 2007-05-10 . chapter 1O my gosh I was looking at your art on Deviantart and I found a link to your story! I love it so much! So much love so much Jordan! Jordan forever! |
 MasterOfThePen 2007-02-03 . chapter 1Finally decided to review:
I remember this one in the first draft! Glad I was able to help you with it. It was certainly worth the wait. So incredibly sweet and fluffy, I melt every time I read it. Keep it up! |
 blackamorose 2007-01-08 . chapter 1omg, i wish that there was more, its so good. |
 Ducklin 2006-12-27 . chapter 1I love it totally love it and if there are people who don't like MollyxJordan pairings tell them to BEWARE! |
 Mysteria Pearl 2006-12-21 . chapter 1THAT WAS SO ENTIRELY ADORIBLY CUTE! I loved it! Very good, you kept me very interested in the plot! You are a very talented author! Keep up the good work! :D
Mysteria Pearl =) |
 SweetSakurablossm 2006-12-15 . chapter 1omg now thats cute
after seeing what happen in the end how he just said he loved her i cryed i mean when he said i love you i started crying then ...and when it keap on going on i was crying more and more
this makes me happy this is what i want to see for her
alot of people say their going to be a 2 season
maybe what you wairt might come true ^-^ ( tuke the last line of what you wort int he fanfic) hehe good job on this it was really sweet |
 Virtual Dragon of Oban 2006-12-15 . chapter 1*sniffle* This actually made me cry. I'm serious! It made me cry! And that doesn't happen very often! I just love the Jordeva pairing, and here I thought that the last ep destroyed the whole series! You wrote this so well... Cocngrats! |
 Fushica 2006-12-13 . chapter 1yay! I loved it! *aikka/eva fangirl heart slowly melting towards jordan/eva fanfics* |
 lil pink pixie 2006-12-13 . chapter 1wicked awesome! i absolutly love the jordanXeva/molly pairing!! i was so sad at the end of the finale that they had to go and he had to stay. i hope that u make this into more than one chapter or that u make a sequel to it!! i luved it so much!! keep on writing! |
 aerolithe68 2006-12-13 . chapter 1I love it! It broke my heart at the end when Jordan had to send them back to Earth... |