 Ichigo-Eyes 2009-08-20 . chapter 1Wow, Out of all the Eva/Jordan fics I've read, this is probably the best 'Jordan returns' fic! You did a great job keeping it short and sweet! |
 Annie C. 2009-05-29 . chapter 1 This was beautifully written! And I loved that closing line- how clever! ^_^ |
 alphawolfnami 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Aw.. I really liked how you make Jordan appear not in his avatar state, but more of the gunner boy he was inside.. TT^TT So cute! |
 stardogs 2007-07-11 . chapter 1i loved it.
write other storyes like this please |
 Holly Lawliet 2007-05-10 . chapter 1O my gosh I was looking at your art on Deviantart and I found a link to your story! I love it so much! So much love so much Jordan! Jordan forever! |
 MasterOfThePen 2007-02-03 . chapter 1Finally decided to review:
I remember this one in the first draft! Glad I was able to help you with it. It was certainly worth the wait. So incredibly sweet and fluffy, I melt every time I read it. Keep it up! |
 blackamorose 2007-01-08 . chapter 1omg, i wish that there was more, its so good. |
 Ducklin 2006-12-27 . chapter 1I love it totally love it and if there are people who don't like MollyxJordan pairings tell them to BEWARE! |
 Mysteria Pearl 2006-12-21 . chapter 1THAT WAS SO ENTIRELY ADORIBLY CUTE! I loved it! Very good, you kept me very interested in the plot! You are a very talented author! Keep up the good work! :D
Mysteria Pearl =) |
 SweetSakurablossm 2006-12-15 . chapter 1omg now thats cute
after seeing what happen in the end how he just said he loved her i cryed i mean when he said i love you i started crying then ...and when it keap on going on i was crying more and more
this makes me happy this is what i want to see for her
alot of people say their going to be a 2 season
maybe what you wairt might come true ^-^ ( tuke the last line of what you wort int he fanfic) hehe good job on this it was really sweet |
 Virtual Dragon of Oban 2006-12-15 . chapter 1*sniffle* This actually made me cry. I'm serious! It made me cry! And that doesn't happen very often! I just love the Jordeva pairing, and here I thought that the last ep destroyed the whole series! You wrote this so well... Cocngrats! |
 Fushica 2006-12-13 . chapter 1yay! I loved it! *aikka/eva fangirl heart slowly melting towards jordan/eva fanfics* |
 lil pink pixie 2006-12-13 . chapter 1wicked awesome! i absolutly love the jordanXeva/molly pairing!! i was so sad at the end of the finale that they had to go and he had to stay. i hope that u make this into more than one chapter or that u make a sequel to it!! i luved it so much!! keep on writing! |
 aerolithe68 2006-12-13 . chapter 1I love it! It broke my heart at the end when Jordan had to send them back to Earth... |
 crazyvegimab 2006-12-12 . chapter 1This is woderful! I love your word choice the description... everything was awesome!
Also puuling a quote from Don and Mya was pretty sweet. I love the effect it added to the story. |