 Kari Twilight Mist 2009-10-16 . chapter 6This story is awesome. I love the plot. May I suggest getting a Beta though? Your grammar is good but you seem to have some trouble spelling. (I tend to be the exact opposite so don't feel bad). |
 effervesce 2009-07-31 . chapter 6This is GREAT. I guess it's probably been abandoned but rest assused it's on my bookmarks for re-reading at any time. |
 NekoDoodle 2009-03-15 . chapter 6^^ |
 dreaminGemini 2008-11-09 . chapter 6Well, this is the third time I've read this fic. If I haven't already told I completely love it. It's soo hot. Is there going to be more chapters? I would love more chapters *begs*
anyway I like your fic yay |
 amaya no shiori 2008-09-11 . chapter 6This was wonderfully done! I love this story and look forward to the future chapters.
It's great how much sokka enjoys having Zuko squirm under him.
You know what would be hilarious? If, sometime, much much later, Iroh were to walk in on Sokka & Zuko. He'd completely freak out.
Zuko would be so embarrassed and flustered, caushing Iroh to assume Sokka was taking advantage of Zuko and become completely over protective of his nephew.
Oh, the drama...
Well, just a thought... Anyway, keep up the great work! And sorry for the ridiculously long review. I just like this story too much...
~Shiori |
 Bluetiger 2008-08-16 . chapter 6I have really enjoyed reading what you have written so far, and although it's now been quite a long time since your last update, I hope that maybe you'll continue with it someday. :)
Given that this is a Zukka fic, I think that you have done a pretty good job keeping everyone in character. There are also quite a few clever ideas in the plot, I particularly liked the totally logical reason for Zuko giving the Belladonna to Iroh, and the fact that you were therefore able to get the cure to Aang, after Sokka and Zuko had departed Appa. :D
I like the way that Zuko and Sokka first become aware of their feelings, since it comes immediately after Zuko has healed Sokka, it suggests that the technique has fostered some sort of spiritual intimacy between them. The desription of Zuko's resulting confusion and uncertainty is, frankly, a joy to read. =) |
 Joveesia 2008-08-03 . chapter 6I love this story XD Great Job! Please keep up the wonderful work! |
 grimm018 2008-07-11 . chapter 6i want an update and i want it NOW!
This is like the best avatar story i've ever read!
Gah! Brilliant! But you really need to stop leaving chapters off on cliffhanger's cause each time i was like |
 Snape Goes Commando 2008-05-24 . chapter 6Gah. ;3;
Strangely enough I found this on Ficwad before here.
Its an awesome story. :O
So totally awesome. xD
Bitchy!Zuko is just priceless. :3 |
 Veravi 2008-04-07 . chapter 6This is so cool! I love the way Zuko & Sokka get into the relationship. Burned Sokka with Zuko helping was absolute fantastic! And it's nice how you develope everything, first "just" handjobs, then **^^ what will happen next then? xD I really hope you'll continue this. Awesome fic, thanks for writing so far. |
 yay sozu! 2008-03-15 . chapter 6 please continue, one of the best fics ever! |
 clairelovesedward 2008-01-14 . chapter 6The thing with the ponytails was really funny, but I think you rushed it. Like they'd almost have sex the first time they were alone together. Other than that, a good story. |
 Pic's-Pixie 2007-12-09 . chapter 6aww wow that was hot lol, oh please update this story i know its been close to a year i think since u've updated, but please, i totally luv the idea of this story and how u describe the characters |
 RueBroadway 2007-10-05 . chapter 6I love it!! I was crackin up through the whole thing...I love it when Zuko gets flushed, lol! |
 XXyaoianimeXX 2007-09-24 . chapter 6Please continue and update quickly for this fic. I love it. |