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| pcg 2008-07-23 ch 10,  | abuseThis is fantastic. Just. Dang. I love the voice you've given Ocelot, and I love the humor and the desperation and the futility. Wonderful fic. |
| TheDonutMistress 2007-06-06 ch 10, | abuseI held off on reading this, since I hadn't played through Portable Ops when I first saw this here. I love it. Perfectly written Ocelot. The time he spent with the supporting characters was great. Everyone's personality has been captured. Your Ocelot and Snake are the best. The flow and tone, the imagery, Snake and Ocelot's never-ending back-and-forth--I love every bit of this. |
| Good-Will-Towards-Metroids 2007-01-16 ch 9, | abuseWonderfully written. I love how Ocelot thinks. I loved the part where he's trying to figure out his and Snakes relatioship. I wonder what Snakes view of it is? This story was amazing, I'd love to see some more MGS work from you in the future. Keep up the good work, eh? |
| Karu Leonnese 2007-01-15 ch 10, | abuseAIE! e_e It's over? Nu! This has TOTALLY changed my view on this pairing. XD I hope you've got other works to show off soon! I'm looking forward to more from you! |
| Karaii 2007-01-15 ch 10, | abuseOh wow...these latest three chapters were beautiful. As usual, your caliber of writing is top-notch - I really enjoy reading this fic! (And all your others!) And I believe you've portrayed Ocelot and Big Boss's relationship marvelously. Knowing what will happen, I can't help but get this tight feeling in my chest concerning Big Boss and his pending demise. I wonder if Ocelot will hate Snake once it's all over? Anyway, update soon, I love this masterpiece! |
| Karu Leonnese 2007-01-09 ch 7, | abuseXD...Alcohol makes everyone play nice...even Ocelot! I just can't say enough how much I love the bitingly sarcastic tone of this. ^_^ |
| Karaii 2007-01-06 ch 7, | abuseI LOVE YOU. I adore your writing, and your Ocelot is just perfect. Kickass humour and a catching storyline! Keep it up, and update soon! |
| Karu Leonnese 2006-12-22 ch 6, | abuseXD Sorrow! Yay! Very lyrical and lovely, as always. And you've officially converted me to a fan of the pairing. |
| Good-Will-Towards-Metroids 2006-12-20 ch 5, | abuseI love this story, there needs to be more Snake/Ocelot-ness out there. I love how they sort of communicate through the slightest body language. Keep it up, I can't wait for an update. |
| Sulphurya 2006-12-12 ch 3, | abuseAmazingly well written! Update soon! |