Sad but truly lovely!

'he explains to the ground near her feet that he was drunk, and she reassures the collar of his vest that she was drunk too' - such an interesting way to vividly convey the situation.. Great job!

So bittersweet. But beautiful. Love your work.

This story was truly like no other. I loved the lasting impression it left with me after reading and it is extremely rare for a fanfiction to convey as much emotion as this one did; especially considering how short it was. All in all, I couldn't wish for anything more.

This was just amazing. I had to re-read it a couple times because I couldn't get enough. Your work amazes me.

I've been reading your stories. Unfortunately, the one I read before this was Scarlet Scroll. I only say unfortunately because I stopped reading Scarlet Scroll and started reading this in the hopes of getting something a little more cheerful and light-hearted, and it seems I couldn't have chosen a worse fic.

That said, there is something compelling in this beyond the surface of...disturbance. I can't say I really liked it, or even enjoyed it, but it has certainly left a lasting impression on me, and in conjunction with Scarlet Scroll, I'm feeling much more depressed than usual after reading this pairing.

I'm not saying the story is bad; quite the opposite, it takes guts and skill to write something so dark and, well, twisted. I applaud your ability as a writer. I could feel Sakura's brokenness, even after she'd egged her sensei into the sordid act. The entire aura of this story gives off a feeling of brokenness, and it doesn't relent even when Naruto shows up at the end. There is a small ray of hope that she may be healed by his return, but the relationship between her and Kakashi will never be the same. And that is sad.

Anyway, I think I've rambled on long enough. To summarize: It was angsty, it was dark, it was somewhat disturbing. I didn't quite like it, as it presents us with dark things we'd rather not contemplate, but I recognize the mastery of the writing and the realism of the story. Real life isn't all sunshine and rainbows.

Once again, I applaud your skill.

Song

Is there a sequel?

I was really expecting something different considering the warning, but it wasn't nearly as controversial as I first thought it would be. A very realistic scenario as things like it happen all the time. Well written and very much a possibility for Sakura's character.

Concrit: none

I don't really know how to describe what I'm feeling after reading this. The characters are sad, hurt and broken. The ending is somewhat hopeful but after all that happened, I doubt story nonetheless.

this story is sad, but I think it was the intention. Very good

loved. it.

really great story.

I truly LOOOOVEEE YOU and your stories...your mind is just something to behold XDDDD

I really, really, really like how realistic this was. This is something that honestly has a possibility of happening. Not in the manga, ofc; but given the plot and characters- yes.

W-Wow... I can't believe it...a Kakashi and Sakura one-shot with a lemon in it! How do you get that kind of image from a 16 year old and a 30 year old? It was a bit sad but at the same time with how Sakura is a bit of a wimp with no real back bone I can totally see it happening to them.

Smexy Itachi-San is out... Yeah, un?

This story was lovely.

Very sad though. I wanted to cry the whole time. The feelings are so real!

I liked though how Naruto brought some sunshine back in to her life again at the end, that was a nice ending :)