Reviews for Second Chance at Love

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Comet Moon 2008-07-16 ch 8,	abuseLove this story Sadden that you've seemed to end it. Question, does Teela and Adam end up togther? Huge new fan Ja ne Jim
D.Torres 2008-04-20 ch 7,	abuseHello, I hope this review finds you in good health. I recently re-read this story and while my previous review still stands, I felt I needed to add that after re-reading it I must say (again) that Teela is not worthy of Adam's love. It took him almost dying to realize she had "real" feelings beyond those of a sibling or friend, for her to realize this. She may hold a special place in Adam's heart, but he should take a moment to reflect exactly how wrong Teela is for him. She may have been spiteful out of jealousy, but she spoke what she felt at the moment(your fine characterization I might add), not how she could allow herself to feel. Castaspella loves Adam, and as she said (in your words) she always has. Adam never had to compete with He-Man for her affections, the same can not be said for Teela (something else Adam should realize in that moment of reflection). Had to share. Please return to this story sometime soon.
DestroyerDRT 2008-03-27 ch 8,	abuseGreat story please finish it.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
DestroyerDRT 2008-03-27 ch 2,	abuseThis story and this chapter made me look back at both Master shaows and I realized that in the 1983 one and to a leaser degree the 2002 show that they over used He-Man.So thank you for that.
Eerie Iri 2007-11-04 ch 8,	abuseThis is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Tom Robinson 2007-09-23 ch 8,	abuseThis is a brilliant story and I look forward to what comes next. :)
ecogirl20 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is a great story! I just read chapter 1, and I can't wait to read the rest.
jadesabre75 2007-09-11 ch 8,	abuseMore please! I was on the edge of my seat!
XTCDraGonZ 2007-07-28 ch 8,	abusewow great story. love the chemistry between the characters. i happened upon your story after i decided to check out the dreadfully small he man fanfiction community after seeing some old clips of the various he man cartoons. but damn... adam just keeps taking abuse from teela eh? why doesn't he banter back with her and give as good as he gets (even in jest to make her blush or something)? y'know... underlying sexual tension not unlike all those other famous couples in movies and novels. He just takes it from her... don't girls hate that? but great story. can't find much stories of this calibre. can't wait till the next chapter. -j0e
ninergrl 2007-07-16 ch 8,	abuseI just finished reading the entire story so far and I have to say, I am very impressed. I loved He-Man as a kid and when I read fan fiction, it just disgusts me when people go off on wild tangents that have no basis whatsoever in the show. In a more adult version of He-Man, I could totally see this happening and would love to watch Prince Adam/He-Man fend off all his admirers from Etheria. And to have Teela be jealous about it. I usually find grammatical errors as well, but I didn't see any in your story. The story line flows very well from one chapter to the next and I can't wait to read the next. Please update when you have a chance!!
Mark C 2007-07-06 ch 8,	abuseA wonderful story so far. Hopefully, Teela or Adam will tell the other how they really feel and they can be together. I can't wait to see what happens next.
GoddessAnjanee 2007-05-27 ch 8,	abuseWell done indeed! Goddess Anjanee :)
GoddessAnjanee 2007-05-27 ch 7,	abuseExcellent chapter! I fear Teela is too late.
GoddessAnjanee 2007-05-27 ch 6,	abuseTeela better tell Adam how she truly feels about him before it is too late.
GoddessAnjanee 2007-05-23 ch 5,	abuseOMG, I hope they will be alright.

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