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| COUGARS SHADES 2007-06-04 ch 4,  | abuseThis is going great! Please, it's been six months now. Please. Please-UPDATE!! Thank you. |
| Rebecca 2007-01-09 ch 4, | abuseInteresting beginning. I look forward to reading more. I do hope Jared is doing something to Adam to make him feel more isolated, because Adam is reacting way out of proportion in I'm-all-alone, no-one-cares, etc. bit. That interpretation simply isn't backed up by the show, by their behaviors in this story, or by the fact that Adam has enough brains to figure out MAA caring for him isn't just an act and his father didn't just hand him off at birth and Teela didn't insult him in this story until after he insulted He-Man. I do wonder what's happening that Adam isn't remembering (besides the conversations). I like Teela liking things uncluttered. Firstly, that really fits with her personality, and secondly, it makes me think of how barren Grayskull is. Slipped by the editing process? |
| jduke 2006-12-21 ch 4, | abusegood chapter. I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. |
| Zorra Reed 2006-12-20 ch 4, | abuseThat was a great chapter! I love the way you potray Mekanek. I never really liked the character before but you make him so...likeable? It's cool the way he gets through to Adam. |
| Zorra Reed 2006-12-20 ch 3, | abuseHmm, you need more reviews I see. *smiles* I know I've read this before over on the board, but for the life of me I can't remember what happened. With it just out of reach it's almost more adventerus reading it over again. At some point during the second chapter I realized someone was reading it over my shoulder and in the thrid chapter they took control of my computer (faster reader then I am) so I must say congradulations on getting a non he-man fan hooked on your fic. She was so disapointed when there wasn't another chapter to read; but I see you've updated so maybe I'll get her to use her own computer this time. Anyway, just wanted to let you know how enjoyable it is reading this again and what a talent you have for writing. You're one of my favorite authors and I'm always looking forward to updates from you. Keep up the great work! |
| jduke 2006-12-18 ch 3, | abuseI can't wait to read more of this story. I'm trying to figure out who this guy is. Please post more soon. |