more plz

yum.

Reasons why you should continue._.
1.IT'S AWSOME
2.I wanna read more._.
3.IT'S AWSOME
4.I luv the lemony deliciousness of this

*bangs head on keyboard*kjfed
That was...woah...just...mhm._. Awsome^_^ SheenaxZelos foreva:P I've beaten every Tales of game and still ToS is my favourite of all time:P

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!
Why? Because I typed all of those out. XD

plz continue

O//O

my goodness.
That was -ahem-.

Oh-ho-ho! I give thanks for this delicious lemon~! Ahaha! Zelos was definitely being dirty-dirty, and Sheena, well, Sheena was trying!

Omigosh. This fic is too adorable! ^_^

I don't nessesarily have any constructive criticism for you, but, I think that you really have a thing for nailing Sheena's personality. Zelos is extremely well done too. :p

Anyways, this is the only straight pairing I like. You did a fantastic job! Keep it up!

no! it was getting to good too!!

O.O o.0 0.0

Whoa, Sheena...and I thought Zelos was sick!

Come on! No more mere cliffies!

I really like where this is going! ((mostly the lemon part >.>;)) No, not just that, but the title fits really nicely into the... theme, thing. Ugh, I can't think right now, too... mm, something...

::adds to story alert::

MWAHAHAHAH! I actually liked that one. Your getting better as you go Jessica lol, you little perv ;P
Oh, I thought this typo was really funny: "Then he would straddle her, [shitless]; she would move her hands along his sculpted abdomen." I was reading it and I was like WTF haha
Anyways, I'll send you the email, but you'll probably already be in Chicago. Oh wells. Keep up the good work haha;D

You are so funni Jessica!

"'If you'll give it me rough, then I'm not complaining'"
lol, I can totally imagine your face as you were writing that.
Hm...Is this Sheena or you who lusts for Zelos?? Mwahaha we will soon find out

lol jk but that was really well written and I still have to write my first fanfic, I'll email it to you first though. I wanna develop the characters more. btw, go to your favorites and click on the author who does Alchemic Wizard (the one with EdXWinry!) and go to the second story of hers (the only other one that's rated M). Once there, go to the fourth chapter (The Hughes) and read the part in italics. MWAHAHA it makes me happy! Enjoi!

Good job on the first chapter ;P I will be reading the others bwahahah!