WE... awsumm story :DD
when are u going to update it? ><

OH YEAH! Tala Your Such A Legend.
Eat That Bryan, You Loser! Hahahaa
Adding This Fic To My Favs! Hope you Update Soon! Xx

This is very belated, sorry about that =P.
You know, that Tala and Bryan part brought tears to my eyes, and that almost never happens when I read stuff! It's not so much what Tala does, more the EASE of the whole thing. And also the fact that I read it with such hunger, and absolutely love it despite how cruel it is. Tala is a fabulous character, and I shouldn't complain because I was waiting for the destruction to happen. He really is pushing everthing aside to get what he wants.
MarianQ's right; you've taken an almost cliched plotline and transfigured it into this incredible and haunting scenario, even with the protagonist's sanity in question (at least I believe so). Incredible. It really is 'the state of obsession'.

This is without a doubt the most incredible, fantastic and amazing story I have ever read. Please, update soon ^-^

my god!
OAO
i actually finish to read this story
oh god i love it
my english sucks but i think i got the point of this
xD
please continue!
i need to know how this going to end!
so please!
;_;
byee >;D

Okay, okay okay...I know this is far late. XD


You know, I kinda made up in my head while I was waiting for this update exactly what was gonna happen in it, but even at that you still knocked ** out of my theory with the whole Bryan thing...never expected that in a million years, but it was way better than what I'd imagined. XD


You've really made Tala properly resourceful, manipulative, obsessive and ruthless. He's too organised to be insane, but too irrational to be otherwise.


I have to say though, all over I love this fic...because you've taken the whole cliched situation of student/teacher to a new length. You've taken a well known concept and stretched it beyond recognition. Which makes it all the better.

OMG! Tala is the bad guy - again, like in the devil in me XDD i loved that one - in this story! and is the puppet master! YEY so cool!! he is so going to need psiquiatric - how the hell do you spell that?... - help!!

Hey! I was wondering, are you still updating this ficcie? I enjoy reading your stories although it must be admitted that I hardly ever review... Keep up the good work!

please update soon T.Tis like...i don't know, i've read this countless times XDD and... counting haha

hey hey hey hey hey hey hey UPDATE!

i luv this story! Please update it soon!:)

This update has made my week! And that was before I even started reading it!
Oh my god, that cliff-hanger is painful! I swear, you'd better get the next chapter up soon or I'll spontaneously combust or something!
Wait a minute...did Tala set up this second rape on purpose? =O! I don't know, that's me guessing, but it would be smart of him! Or...maybe it was something to do with Max...hmm
I actually feel sorry for every character in this story! That's a record I must say...even Brooklyn to a certain extent because this sure isn't an easy case for him. But damn does he sound cool, I can picture it so easily XD
I'm still stuck on the 'what's going to happen with Tala and Bryan?!?' question =P I swear I haven't read a story which gripped me so much in ages...I'm on the edge of my seat dying to know the outcome of every single sub-plot imaginable. It's crazy.
Damn. Don't make me wait much longer please
=D

OMG I KNEW IT! i knew that was going to happen at the end, I get why too. ^^ omg, if you take forever to update this, i will hunt you down~

OH...MY...**...GOD.



That's all I can say...Jesus Christ...Tala's a complete nut. He really is...


This is so sad...seriously...but so thirilling. The ending...oh, god the end. I can't wait for this next update...PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME WAIT!

wth! I wrote you such a long review and it didn't send!

D: I said, omg what is Tala doing?!?! What did he just THROW himself on a guy to try to help Kai?! Did someone just walk by and decide- hey there's a cute kid -RAPE-, lolol, I thought Tala would like go to court and then and confess to having beat up Max- and bring everyones attention to the fact that Max could press charges against him- not run to someone and go 'F ME PLEASE', lolol.

BUT, if he got raped, and they did a medical examination, it would look like all the bruises from kai's fun time with hinm came from the second rape! So MAYBE just MAYBE, i answered my own question!

lol, anyway that was a great chapter! Thx SO MUCH for updating- dude, i LOVE YOU = 3, no really, look outside ur window -winks in a, yea i stalk you kinda way- xD haha, jkkzz,

I liked that max was all jealous and when Tala tried to throw himself at Kai in the coffee shop, it made me think all 'tee hee, Kai's so sexy ^_^' cause he is, he's a sexy lil bug a sexy lil bug who bangs Tala >= ), who's a sexy f*

... -cough- ... right moving on...

did Max sleep in zee same bed with Kai!? I was wondering, so I must ask, and be sure you'll be hearing this question AGAIN from me later on (ur fault for talking to me, you ** xD)

Right, so... um, great chapter- i really liked it, you did an awesome job, you yourself is awesome, but of course not as awesome as me (jkz jkz), blah blah blah, Kai will rule over with Tala by his side and then mountain lava penguins will soar through the sky, and update soon = D

(Here's hoping this one sends, copying it somewhere else it case it doesn't)

-signed

zEe GrEaT iIxNe

P.S

What is Voltaire doing/thinking while his grandson is getting charged for raping a miner, is he like, sitting somewhere planning to disown him, so sitting someone thinking 'that ** better win that case =_= how dare he soil the Hiwatari name'

I CAN'T BELIEVE I CAN STILL WRITE LIKE 80 MORE CHARACTERS, wow, they really increased the amount you can write on these reviews

...Okay now I'm actually done... *cough* you better love me for this review :P

I'm sorry I haven't been around much, but after March 4th, TALK TO ME ON MSN = D

~ Peace