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american farmer
2008-08-14
ch 8,
abusethey are going to get caught no doubt i wandered if the cops would just happen to pull into kai's drive way and see them kiss. i have this feeling kai might not come back and if he does he'll propbly be drunk or something. poor bryan! update!
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 8,
abuseOh my.Poor Tal(how many times will I keep saying this?).Please update when ya have the time.I'm totally favoriting and alerting this.
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 7,
abuseMy poor people.Heart broken nfused Kai.Raped/Sexually Assaulted Bry. ? Tala.(I think he's happy,though.)
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 6,
abuseWoah.Like,wow.
And,what is our dear Falcon planning?
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 4,
abuseIt's okay Tala, you'll get him. Thanks for the chapter.
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 3,
abuseYou go Falcon!
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 2,
abuseKai,can't you see what you're doing to him? My poor Tala...Greta Chapter!
CrimsonShadowOfRegret
2008-08-09
ch 1,
abuseCONTINUE,oh,wait,you already did...Yay!
RyuuKai
2008-07-17
ch 8,
abuseMega super awesome ive lost track of this and stumbled on to it again love the chapters keep up the good work
fireborn012
2008-05-12
ch 8,
abuseDidn't Stink. :)

like the story, like the couple, love the plot. You've done really well with it and I can't wait to read more...you've left it at a cliffhanger *tear* I can't wait to see what will happen.

I hope you plan on putting Bryan's character into some more as well...I'm not a big fan of his but I like the plot you've got revolving around him too.

It's on my favs! ;)
khauzy
2008-05-11
ch 8, anon.
abuseyay! update! i love this story! kai better come back!! *shakes fist at kai*
Kaz-za-15
2008-05-11
ch 8,
abuseYes! I'm so happy you updated.
:)
*glares evily at bryan*
lolz.
Purple-Kissed-Wishes
2008-05-10
ch 8,
abuseWAHEY! More Ksi/Tal lemony goodness =P But Kai's mean for mean being to Tala. That man needs a good slapping.

Oh, kinky. XD

Hahaha thanks for updating, Lyson, and here's to hoping that you keep the updating going on XD
iixne
2008-05-10
ch 8,
abuseNO!WHY BRYAN?! i hate you! omg! the prick! D: SOB! i can't believe him! NO, no, no! And Kai's being very mean, but that's okay, cause it's Kai, and when you're that pretty, you're allowed to be mean = ) xD Although I can't help feeling a lil sorry for Tala D: omg, poor **, all sad and f-ed up, all dellusional, thinkin he'z in love with Kai. But who WOULDN'T love kai?? : D is kai gonna get put on trial for this? But tala would deny everything right, cause he wouldn't want kaikai to go to jail! : D! And even if he went, Kai's so rich his grandfather could jus bail him out o_o u no it's only illegal if the age gap is more then 5 years? (my friends taking law and told me this) that meanz an 18 year old and a 13 year old could date, D: EW ... so wrong.. anyway xD awesome chappy, lotz of goodness. Was that flash back or a dream where Kai said "I love you"
Great Chapter! You're awesome! I wuv you to bitz and pieces!
Go online you fiend!
xD -iixne
StZen
2008-05-10
ch 8,
abuseOh my god I just spent the last 2 hours reading this story, and wow I can't get enough of it! Such a clever story-line, and filled with all this emotion and complications. Gah, I love it, update soon!
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