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| scifigirl77 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseThat was funny. I love it! Great job. |
| Cantare 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseMan. This is awesome. I unfortunately haven't played through all of FFVII or the other games you've written for. So I settled with reading a story for a fandom I know. I actually think this is the first POTC fic I've read. What a great way to start. The wry humor you wove throughout this piece was really effective. The exchange between the two angels was very well done, each of them the way I imagine an angel of light and an angel of dark would act under humorous circumstances. And Jack Sparrow of course was great, ever the nonchalant slippery character that could always get out of any dire situation, except maybe if he's chained to a mast. Loved that little joke about Elizabeth by the way. The ending is awesome as well. I can picture this whole story in my head just as vividly as the movie. Cheers. |
| Queen O' Randomness 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseHilarious, i love it |
| Forestwater 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuse. . . excellent. |
| Talim-Hime 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was just hilarious. This the best Jack Sparrow dialogue ever, and his stunt at the end was completely awesome. Good work. |
| kittikat8531 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, like always. A terrific writer without a doubt. Such a shame that isn't what happened in the movie. |
| in the turning of the knife 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuse*claps* a bit confusing, but that might just be because I'm still stuck in my At World's End mode...(aka, my mind is making up fifty different fanfictions at once). well done, good write and good luck! -the edge |
| Squall67584 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAh, only Captain Jack Sparrow would get away with something like that. Brilliant! |
| iamanundeadmonkey 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusehaha! liked the 'gents, this is the day you will always remember as the day that you almost judged Captain Jack Sparrow.' that was funny! loved it! |
| crazy-emerald-blue 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseomg this is so funny! hehehe |
| Pen Against Sword 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant as always, lovely. I highly enjoyed this one. Jack was in character, and your originals are always just that--original. (Hmm, my brain tells me technically they aren't original seeing as they're ancient biblical figures, but I'm telling my brain to shut up.) Thanks for advertising my continuing Pirates series. --Pen Against Sword |
| DarkShine07 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseNow that was a very nice read. I loved that, I have never even considered the thought that maybe our famous Captain could outsmart the angels. Beautiful concept, I absolutely love it. Nothing could be a better scenario for the movie to use. I applaud you. -SparrowFan07 |
| Cazrolime 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abusexD That was /awesome/. |
| Saralonde 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was SO funny, and you managed to write Jack in character. I could really see him standing in nothing with Azazel and Gabriel. An awesome one-shot. |
| Just Jill 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, now that was fun. Excellent job! I loved how you got him down just perfectly. Just Jill |