I really like the style. It was a bit weird, since there was only dialog, but it was interesting and rather refreshing to have everything explained by their words. I liked it!

At first I was wary of reading something with nothing but dialogue, but I really enjoyed this. Their conversation is really well writen adn you captured the scene nicely. It's cute how they're almost flirting but being so machanical and militaristic about it all.

May the Muses visit you often.

D'AWW =D Loved it! Dialogue-only fics have a certain sort of charm that I love so much XD. Really cute banter, and nice and IC~

""Sir, your injuries seem to have addled your brain."" Ah, that is SO Hawkeye. I can see her saying that, completly straight-faced and everything.

This is really good. The format works well.

hehehehe playful banter is so cool

Cute. ^^

cute! Their tones means business yet they are talking about personal matters! You can so feel love! (or it could be just my imagination, but who cares!)

lol! Nice. Funny too. I can just see a bored Roy saying all those things. lol nice work!

hhahah that was funny expecail the way you made it all coversation! lol now im happy

wow.. nice fic.. care to elaborat more? joke.. joke.. it's a well written fic.. i hope this is not a oneshot.. i like it.. please update soon if this is not a oneshot.. thanks! BTW, great fic.. is this a oneshot?

Erinn