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| deathgeonous 2008-05-24 ch 5,  | abuseNice and sweet story. Thanks for writing this, bye for now. |
| GillianRose 2008-04-04 ch 5, | abuseWow is this gorgeous. I just found it. I am in awe of your storytelling. You handle the characters so delicately - no caricatures, thank you so much for that. |
| twilight seeker3 2008-03-26 ch 4, | abuseI am fairly new to this 'verse and and slowly catching up on long past posted stories...I have to tell you this one made me laugh til I literally CRIED..the shoe string tying was too much...you must have younger siblings...this is a wonderful character progression between Jayne and River...totally believable..as well as the one between Inara and Simon...I find all your "voices" consistant with the characters they portray...thanks for sharing twilight_seeker |
| Kittie La Rue 2008-03-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is nothing short of an AMAZING fanfic. The characters are beautifully recreated and all the differences feel believable. This is worthy of Joss Whedon himself. After having given up on fanfic for a few years, this was recommended to me by a friend and I have enjoyed reading this SO much. Fanfic seems to me consisted of a large amount of rubbish, but it is worth it all to find 'a diamond in the rough' like this one. Please write more soon. MORE MORE MORE! |
| Nyah 2008-03-06 ch 5, | abuseYou've done a really remarkable job with such a character driven source. I've been through a wide range of emotions reading these first two parts and have already started to forget that they aren't canon. Well done. Looking forward to the rest. |
| HecatonchiresLM 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseloved the list of "reason's to shoot people" |
| CZGoldEdition 2008-01-12 ch 2, | abuseMore brilliance and perfect characterizations of everyone on-board Serenity! Awesome! I really must get to sleep now, but I intend to keep reading tomorrow. This is truly a lovely story. |
| CZGoldEdition 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseSquee! This was so full of win! You definitely got those snarky Wash comments in I was looking for. And Inara and Simon's conversation was genius, it really explained a good deal about both characters in a very fitting, realistic way. Also - syrup in the hair being normal behavior for River, hehehee! I about died of laugher and happy. Great job! |
| Blackdragonpi 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abusefunny. I once had a cousin of mine do the same thing. |
| Fififelicity 2007-10-24 ch 5, | abuseAgain, this is so beautiful. You make me laugh and pull at my heart strings. I love it |
| dancingfirefly124 2007-10-13 ch 5, | abuseWow. I really, really love the insights you've given into each of the crew members. And I'm so happy you brought Inara back! |
| CedarPineSpruce 2007-07-29 ch 5, | abuseVery enjoyable. Again, everyone was in character, excellent word flow, and a lovely storyline. I am looking forward to the next story. :-) |
| CedarPineSpruce 2007-07-29 ch 4, | abuseI liked the perspective that Jayne liked having these two Good girls on his arm, as Good girls can't be bought. |
| CedarPineSpruce 2007-07-29 ch 3, | abuseLoved Simon's speech about being a brother. *sigh* Wonderful. :-) |
| CedarPineSpruce 2007-07-29 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. I love how Jayne lets River know that she isn't being crazy, she is just acting like a girl. So true! Simon's delicate consideration of Inara, is so perfectly in character. I had never thought about that before. :-) |