awesome so far!

Hi,

I've enjoyed the three chapters of this story that are posted here. Are you still working on it? It really doesn't feel finished yet.

Old-Crow

dang it . . . is wanting more . . . of both the stories of yours that i read . . .

good story, a shame you abandoned it

Great story - too bad it appears abandoned. Thanks for sharing!

haha, love it. also, love your site with it's Harem

sweet plot and story, update soon please.

Great story, I just couldn't find the smut you said it should be in the third chapter, but I guess I got a little sidetracked. Hope you update it soon enough.
Keep up the great work.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

This really good, and I'd love to see the real stuff... but the link doesn't work... some help possibly? Oh, and there's also adultfanfiction dot net to post stories on and they allow anything. Good Story so far... hope you pick it back up soon.

Good so far.

...Oh...my...god...This is AWESOME! Great job, keep up the good work, and update soon!

good

Amazing story!! Update soon...

nice