 Space Odin 2009-09-22 . chapter 3awesome so far! |
 old-crow 2009-04-22 . chapter 3Hi,
I've enjoyed the three chapters of this story that are posted here. Are you still working on it? It really doesn't feel finished yet.
Old-Crow |
 gypsyassassin 2009-01-02 . chapter 3dang it . . . is wanting more . . . of both the stories of yours that i read . . . |
 jojobevco 2008-11-14 . chapter 3good story, a shame you abandoned it |
 ILikeComps 2008-10-24 . chapter 3Great story - too bad it appears abandoned. Thanks for sharing! |
 Paladin-kriss 2008-07-11 . chapter 3haha, love it. also, love your site with it's Harem |
 Character Assassination 2008-03-27 . chapter 3sweet plot and story, update soon please. |
 doRodrigo 2008-03-09 . chapter 3Great story, I just couldn't find the smut you said it should be in the third chapter, but I guess I got a little sidetracked. Hope you update it soon enough.
Keep up the great work. |
 Lord Akuma 2007-10-21 . chapter 3UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
 ProperT 2007-10-16 . chapter 2This really good, and I'd love to see the real stuff... but the link doesn't work... some help possibly? Oh, and there's also adultfanfiction dot net to post stories on and they allow anything. Good Story so far... hope you pick it back up soon. |
 HarryPotterFinalfantasyfanatic 2007-09-22 . chapter 3Good so far. |
 Shulblaka Saphira 2007-09-21 . chapter 3...Oh...my...god...This is AWESOME! Great job, keep up the good work, and update soon! |
 killroy777 2007-09-01 . chapter 3good |
 pumpkinhands 2007-08-22 . chapter 3Amazing story!! Update soon... |
 Kollvarg 2007-06-27 . chapter 3nice |