kind of depressing, but interesting none the less. Please update GFBS.
-Kate

you have a nasty habit of not finishing your stories and discontinuing them right when it gets interesting... and it is intersting, so i say again, you suck

This story does have potential. I hope you continue it.

Strictly my opinion,

The coversation in this chapter could have been a bit stronger, especially when Kim asked Shego why she was scared. It was kind of a sudden question and was written as if it had no emotion attached. Try giving us some more insight on what Shego's saying with her body language to give Kim the idea that she's scared.

Good chapter, I'll be back for the next one.

Interesting chapter...definatly has what it takes to be a plot developing story.

See ya next chapter...

I'm glad you continued it. Still good, keep it up

This is really good for a first story, and I like where it's leading.
I'm looking forward to reading more.

i like it so far keep writing I wanna know what happens

This is very interesting and I would definitely like to see more!

Definitely looking good so far. I'd love to see where this goes... ^_^

Chapters. Definately. I can't stand seeing it left like that, good as it is. I need to see Kim saving Shego ;.; Yes, I'm pathetic, I know.

definate potential very poetic and it seems like something shego would do. Her emotions could kill her.

definately has potential, I'd like to know what happenes next.

For some reason, I could never see Kim actually crying for Sheego. Oh yes, you spelled "Sheego" wrong ;) Good chapter, I guess, but I don't think it's fashionable enough for Sheego to be a les.

This story has very good potential for a very good story im looking forward to an update so i hope you continue i wanna know what happens to shego