very fun story enjoyed it alot thanks!

I know it must be weird, getting a review on this story close to ten years after you uploaded it, but I just wanted to say that this was a lot of fun to read! It felt a little dry at some points, and I do think that it has potential to be continued, but all in all it's a really nice follow up to 'Heart of a Warrior'.

It helps that they made a surprise visit to Cebu. I'm from the Philippines myself, so all the familiar mentions (from Palawan to lumpia for lunch!) made me grin like an idiot. Heh.

Just like all your other stories, I loved it.

I realy liked the story, however the part about c-4 was inacurate it is a very stable explosive and will only explode if an electrical current is ran through is such as a blasting cap or one of Storms lightning bolts. By the way I've never heard a motorcycle refered to as a 'scoot'where did this come from.

super kawaii i loved it good job

Very cute story.I love the and ororo totally belong together.

aw! that was so cute. i loved it!

This was f...ing great.

Do the wedding next!

Please?

this was so funny but good

when wil thay get married?

really cute. I really loved it.

Love great story keep them coming:)

Excellent! This story had it all, suspense, action, humor and romance. Doesn't get much better but from you one expects nothing less. I honestly don't know why I didn't read this sooner! I guess time and holidays and fanfiction not working right but now I'm looking forward to reading your most recent story, For the Good of Mankind - and other flamin' BS which I'm sure will be just as excellent. What a treat on slow weekend!

I'm constructively saying that this is going on my fav stories list, along with the prequel. Howzat?

This was such a beautiful sequel to your other story. You write Storm/Logan's relationship so well as well as Jubilee's and Logan's father/daughter relationship too. I'm glad I read it. But I'm still waiting for the next chapter to this story's sequel. Hurry up! lol