This is really funny. I now love this fic. What a nice twist! The mayor was hilarious. Do Not Corrupt the Children. :)

*Pie to the izzle*

"...because he liked her and we all do stupid things for love."

That last line was golden; so true! Great job, this was super cute. Especially with Blink rambling on and Mush's amazement at everything. Alice was also an OC that I didn't feel like shooting. ;D Nice work!

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Wow! Mush is hilarious!

"He cowered behind the door and wished Kid Blink would faint from the heat so Mush could go in, remove him, and put this awful experience behind all three of them." Definately something Mush would do! Jump in and save Blink!

"Mush saw the mayor heading towards the door, so he dashed, arms flailing and head thrown back (it’s not his fault, the poor kid just isn’t a graceful runner), around the corner to hide." Genius! I was laughing so hard!

HAHAHAHA LOLOLOLOLOL I loved it! So sweet. Probably one of the cutest stories I ever read. Mush made me crack up in this! Thanks I really realy really enjoyed this! :)

This was so well thought out. I loved it, I loved every description of it. Brilliant.

I especially enjoyed Mush playing the part of comic relief, as he's not usually the one I see being the funny one.

Great one shot, I'm off to read more of your delicious fics

Aw. That's cute. It seems that it would be more hot INSIDE of the building because of all the air being trapped in there and they didn't have any central cooling units. I don't know, but that is how it works at my house.

I almost would have liked to have Mush stay outside and have the moment only be Kid Blink and Alice, but I can appreciate him being there as well. The bit about him banging his head repeatedly on the doorframe made me chuckle because I mentally bang my head against stuff all the time in awkward situations.

Also the 'flushed down the toilet' made me laugh because there wasn't indoor plumbing then (but it is okay that you used it because you didn't have a character say it). I just always get a kick out of modern references in period pieces. It makes me go: "whoa, wait a second!". Really it is a lot of fun.

This was sweet. I wish there was more resolution to it though. All we know is that Alice and Blink had chemistry despite his stench. I guess I just would have liked to know if it continued in secret behind dad's back or if it stopped. I'd liked to think it continued... _

Aww! How cute and sweet at the very end! "Miss Van Wyck"...ah, so sentimental! LOL But I think this is a sweet and fun fic! So yeah, great job!

Very cute and funny, although the mayor of New York at the time was Robert Anderson Van Wyck, so his daughter's surname would have been Van Wyck and not Green.

Teehee.

Blink stinks.

Oh it rhymes. Haha.

Anywho.

This is prolly one of the most realistic newsies stories I've read in a long time. The mayor flipping out, Alice getting in trouble-very very true to the times.

It was cute, too. Blink being all oblivious to the fact that he smells. And Mush. Aw.

Mkay, well, just wanted to say, I loved this. ;]

I liked this a lot. My two favorite parts:

"It would also corrupt the children and he is very against corrupting the children. It’s one of his policies: Do Not Corrupt the Children. Alice, as we will now call her because we now know that it is her name, had stitched it into a pillow for him when she was ten."

"Mush saw the mayor heading towards the door, so he dashed, arms flailing and head thrown back (it’s not his fault, the poor kid just isn’t a graceful runner), around the corner to hide."

This made me laugh, thanks! :oD