I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This is a good story but, it kinda sad.I read it to my younger cousin and she cried.

The ending was so...!! Hahaz, suddenly they just magicallyy get healed and it's a happy ending!! ^.^
I would have liked to see what happened after they woke up, but oh well.
This is an okai oneshot, but to be perfectly honest, i think your stories are better.

i like your story its kind of sad how she was trying to kill herself, its good hope ot see others from you.

This story is awesome

This was a awesome story. You went into the perfect ammount of detail. And that song I am looking it up to hear. The words were just WOW. I hope you make a sequal to tell what happens between the two after they awaken.