This was so awesome! But sad! Thanks!

guard and yokai NOT gaurd and yokkai!

This story was just incredible! I'm happy I took the time to read it :D

another awesum story by you! keep writing plz?

i love it a lot

Wow thats really good I just have one question so did Goku remeber all of it when he woke up or did he forget.

really never expected that ending but it was prettu darn good :P

I LOVE KONZEN AND GOKU STORIES! Well, Sanzo, Konzen, Goku, Kenren, Gojyo, Tenpou and Hakkai stories. HEe hee, sorry, kind hyper today.

I love it! I always wondered why he was locked up. It had the feel of a real episode, so it was like it really happened! Good job! _

That was great,keep up the good job.I hope you do another good story like this one.
Thank You very much in writing this story so that i and everyone else can read it.

The story was so sad... I'm very touched why Goku was so alone.

that was really good! and it has a happy ending. that's so nice!

Tenpo is not the General. Kenren is the General and Tenpo is the Marshal. Gensui Should be higher than Taisho, but Tenpo didnt want to stand out.

*OH man*

It basically hurts me to the core of my being to see Konzen so vulnrerable and defenceless in his forn, in Tenkai..

For weeks, i have been trying to find out WAD* bloody weapon he uses, but to no avail. Den* I was told tat he does not FIGHT* at ALL*..

Imagine the shock..

AnywaeZ

Ya plotline ish great, u can make it into a sequel and sequel to end all sequels...

I have ways and means to twist and produce long story plots, so if u need amny help, feel free to email me.

Till then, carry on ya zeal fer writing saiyuki fics.

Lotsa wadeca and warever,

C.S. kA DKonzen in mirc and icq, (SG.)

ok, i noe you said no chapter 2. but it would be nice if you'd continue it. It's very nice and touching.. i really enjoyed it.. veri nice...