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| starspawn07 2008-05-29 ch 11,  | abuseso far so intense, keep it up :) ( hmm, appears like I'm flooding the review section, so I'll keep quiet for now, but I'll be following this story all the way ;) |
| starspawn07 2008-05-09 ch 10, | abuseWhoa, reminds me of Species, except now she also has GUNS ! >:D Take your time but do update :) |
| starspawn07 2008-01-18 ch 9, | abusewow, intense ! take your time but do update :) |
| starspawn07 2007-11-08 ch 7, | abusethe characters communicate surprisingly well with each other 0.o anyways, the action and atmosphere are perfect. keep that up and do update soon ! |
| Stormseer88 2007-04-01 ch 6, | abuseThis is a very interesting story and I expect an update soon! |
| starspawn07 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story ! Plz keep writing ! Suggestion: have Kelly manifest some of the Predators' physical traits e.g big forehead, deepset golden eyes, small fangs, symmetrical freckles etc otherwise she looks too human ("nordic" to be exact) XD |
| Oak Tree Woman 2007-03-15 ch 6, | abuseUPDATE UPDATE!! |
| atomic noodle 2007-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's getting better and better, keep writing! This is my favorite AvP fanfiction =D |
| Oak Tree Woman 2007-02-01 ch 5, | abuseGreat! UPDATE! |
| Oak Tree Woman 2007-01-26 ch 4, | abuseWonderful! |
| Hattu 2007-01-09 ch 3, | abusevery good, so when is the next chapter online? =) |
| Oak Tree Woman 2007-01-07 ch 3, | abuseThis is a good story. plz continue. |
| atomic noodle 2007-01-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseWoah, your story has a fawesome plot! Get chapter 4 up, it's cute that Kelly thinks of herself as an angel ^.^ |
| corthis 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abusethis is good, it's gonna be very interesting to find out what that babies gonna do in life. |