| Reviews for The Ghost in the Team |
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The Voice 3/8/07 . chapter 5good chapter. Keep it going. |
Allen Pitt 3/7/07 . chapter 5Rily did a good job of telling them what he needed to without revealing any other info. And hey, didn't mention Angel, points for that one... I sure hope Spike becomes corporeal soon, it's kind of a drag being a ghost... I wonder if Ori / Goa'uld sensors would even detect him if he was corporeal (no life signs etc)... |
bacarditoo 3/6/07 . chapter 5a very original story, must admit i never thought to cross tv programmes before but this does work, enjoying it very much, looking forward to the next part, best wishes, bacarditoo |
Harm Marie 3/5/07 . chapter 5Good chapter. |
Meirelle 2/27/07 . chapter 4Spike and Riley face to face. It's a disaster waiting to happen. :D I can't wait! |
Harm Marie 2/10/07 . chapter 4Good chapter. |
The Voice 2/10/07 . chapter 4So far so good. Update soon. |
Allen Pitt 2/10/07 . chapter 4Should be quite the interesting meeting... Hm, they're unlikely to get an empty box in the mail, so it's really up to Sam to corporealize Spike...then again if anyone can do it, she can... and who knows, maybe the amulet could be used against the Ori... I would like to see Spike re-corporealize fairly soon...having a real live (sort of) vampire in the SGC complex could be ... interesting... Especially when they realize that a vampire is a lot like a Goa'uld (an alien entity takes over the body of a human) -with the added complexity that the original William is back in control now. very weird.. * One wonders if the light of other suns would cause Spike to combust- Angel was ok in daylight in Pylea for example... it might only be our sun... |
DementedLeaf 2/10/07 . chapter 4I like it. Looks like it has definite potential, keep writing. |
Jedi Buttercup 1/20/07 . chapter 3I could swear I'd already reviewed this. Sorry! You've got a good start going here- I'll put it on alert to follow where you go with it in future. |
Meirelle 1/11/07 . chapter 3Awesome. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. :D |
The Voice 1/10/07 . chapter 3Awesome chapter. Update soon. |
Allen Pitt 1/7/07 . chapter 3Poor Spike-imagine Riley's reaction when he gets THAT phone call. Also poor Riley-he'll be convinced Sp is a danger to the SGC, but security concerns mean he can't tell them why... hopefully Sam will figure something out, 'cause it's not likely that Lindsey will be mailing them that empty box any time soon... hm, next is finding out that Spike can't go too far from the amulet... Makes you wonder what'd happen if they tossed it through a stargate ... Poor Riley-he's in effect opened up his unit to being 'found out' by the SGC, ie just what it does and all that... ** You missed a chance for Spike to think that Teal'c was a Knight of Byzantium (last guys he saw with symbols on forehead) but what the heck... |
cflat 1/6/07 . chapter 3This is good! Can't wait for more! |
Harm Marie 1/5/07 . chapter 3Good chapter |