 TheSilverback 2006-12-18 . chapter 2Yay! Another good one!
Kagura x Kurosawa is one of my pet favorite combos, but it always loses out to Yukari. Although I totally understand why.
Kagura's note was GREAT! A bit about herself and then making the nice move in a friendly, not pushy way.
Kurosawa's reply was even better than the one from Sakaki, I think. ^^ Still no, but encouraging. |
 RandomlyRandomness 2006-12-15 . chapter 2This seems it will get interesting. Though I couldn't help notice, Ouyama/Yomi? Since when did you start branching off with him? I thought he would be with Chihiro.
On a different note you do relieze that you are creating more fics than completing them? Tangled, The Better life, you don't need to listen to me but wouldn't it be a good idea to start finishing some of them? |
 DXEdgeHeadRStarTNA 2006-12-15 . chapter 1This is a nice looking fic. I can't wait for the ones for Kagura/Tomo, Yomi/Kagura and the one I CANNOT wait to see, Chiyo/Yomi. (Yes, I know, some of these are one-sided, but as I like to say: Who gives a crap?!) Please continue.
By the way, I was relieved when there was no sight of Sakaki/Yomi. No offense to anyone, especially SephirothBeatrix, but the idea of Yomi being paired up with and being dependant on someone taller than her is just not right in my view.
But anyway, keep it up. |
 PockyGirl of the Phoenix Souls 2006-12-14 . chapter 1Bring on the next poem! |
 TheSilverback 2006-12-14 . chapter 1Love Notes! That is an interesting idea. Love letters and love confessions are so cute and endearing in anime. It would be very cool to see the reactions of those receiving these love letters, or the circumstances surrounding the placing of the notes.
For example, I see Kaorin as being utterly terrified and unable to hand that note to Sakaki or even leave it on her desk, but putting in Sakaki's shoe locker when there is NOBODY in the halls. So you could build up stories around that too.
However, just the notes themselves are uber-cool because it's like a snapshot of this character's feelings. It will be interesting to see how each different person expresses themselves in writing, what they have to say and to who!
Nice first pairing. Aww, poor Kaorin. But Sakaki turned her down very nicely, I have to say. She tried to leave Kaorin with some self-respect and dignity while still saying "No". And surprisingly, Sakaki opened up quite a lot about herself, which is kind of shocking in a way.
I look forward to your next Love Letters! |
 SephirothBeatrix 2006-12-14 . chapter 1Nice idea with the letters. :D
But no SakakiYomi? D: (heavy sigh)... bleh. Still a very good fic indeed. I'm not too cheery with that now however. T.T |
 Anime Rebirth 2006-12-13 . chapter 1I really liked this story, It's nice that you had Kaorin finally admit her feelings to Sakaki, it's just a shame that she doesn't feel the same way. At least Sakaki still wants to be freinds. I hope you write a letter explaining how Kaorin reacted to Sakaki's response. Well Take care...td
'till next time |
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