Reviews for The Twelve Days of Christmas

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^^ 2007-06-01 ch 12, anon.	abuseOkay, so yeah, I'm reading this in June...sweatdrop. I LOVE this fic. Actually, I love all of your AS fics. You are by far the best fanfiction writer on this site (as far as I've read.) (no offense to you other guys) (actually, mostly girls, but I digress). The stuff you write is almost as good as the actual manga, and that's incredible. You should seriously consider a career in writing. Before reading your fics I really didn't like Katan/Rosiel that much, but now I do. My favorite chapter of this series, of course, was the Zaphikel/Raziel one. (Razi-chan is my favorite character.) They were all really good though, and I'm not just saying that. Mou, this review is too long, sorry. Okay yeah, you get the point.
mullu 2007-02-02 ch 7,	abuseI was waiting to finish all the 'chapters' to leave a review... But this is just too much. How do you do this? How? OMG. Sakuya. OMG. Sakuya wondering about his feelings for Setsuna. Screaming silently (with that mind-blowing sexy cigarrette in his mouth). Not letting it out. I love you. I really do.
Contra Mundi 2006-12-24 ch 12,	abuseAW~! It's ENDING~~?? TT^TT That sucks. This was cute, but HOW COME SETSUNA AND SARA GET AN EXTRA CHAPTER?? AND ROCIEL AND KATAN TOO~! glares Why not Zaphikel and Raziel? Or Kira and Katou? sobs You're mean! Anyways, this was cute. I liked the fact that you didn't make them all that lovey-dovey. I find that most pairings lose it once they become a couple and the manga/anime/story drags on. You managed to write a story about them as a couple that doesn't get on my nerves! Kudos! Can I get a boo-yah? ^_^ I like the line "He looked at her like she had grown a second head." That line was cute. I liked it. But there is a problem. I think this might be the first time I told you...You never use 'sweatdrop' in a fic. It's too manga-esque and it doesn't fit in with the writing. But that's about all that's wrong with it. Nice job! ^_^
Lena 2006-12-24 ch 10, anon.	abuseJa,ja,ja.
mother moon 2006-12-24 ch 11,	abuseHello! Im keep meaning to review...but forgetting :-) so yes, here IT is (ooer): these are brilliant! thats rubbish sorry. O well, this one and the one with Kurai and Belial (eight maids milking I think) are definately my new favourites! x
Contra Mundi 2006-12-22 ch 10,	abuseOh-my-god! squeal! I LVOE IT! It has fluff, it has good writing, it has kissing! You have my undying gratitude! huggles hard Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! tears of joy My favorite line was "“Fuck, Kira,” Kato moaned, “I have the door locked so you figure that means, ‘come on in’?”" That was sher genius. XD And of course this fic has to have cussing. It's Kira and Kato, what do you expect? Katou is probably AS's crudest character ever, but he's also my favorite. XD I especially liked the end where Kira suggests that they get out there and see hwo many of the Ten Commandments they can break. And the ending!
Contra Mundi 2006-12-21 ch 8,	abuseAbsoulutely brilliant! I always thought of Belial as a hermaphrodite, though. I always figured that he-she- alright, let's go with 'it'- had no sex. The ending was very cute. KISSING! Gotta love the kissing. Especially when it has to do with mistletoe. ^_^ There was a slight problem, though. In the manga, or at least, the scans, Belial always refers to him/her/itself as 'one'. He/She/It never says 'I' and never says 'me'. I always found that rather cute, actually. I made one of my RP characters talk like that. XD But all in all, a wonderful job. I liked the way you made it seem like Kurai was still enamoured by Setsuna, but not very much so. I never liked love triangles... but when it's two girls and one guy it's somehow not so bad...Maybe it's a persykology thing. XD
Lena 2006-12-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseVery tender! x)
Contra Mundi 2006-12-17 ch 5,	abuseBalu wasn't really one of the better female characters, really... But you portrayed her very nicely in here. ^_^ I personally think Michael would have been a brat when he was seven. XD He certainly grew up to be one. gets killed x_x Admitted, it's the shortest one so far, but that doesn't stop it from being sweet. I actually feel rather sorry for poor old Lucifer/Lucifiel. Imagine having your fate planned out like that for you. That's like Damien in The Omen. I hate all those stories where "It's your Fate. You can't do nuffin' 'bout it." Actually, Michael was really cute in here. We can see at what age he got his speech impediment (sp?). XD Can't he say 'you' instead of 'ya'?
mother moon 2006-12-17 ch 4,	abuseaw poor sevy...he's not all that bad :-) Yes the whole this-making-us-feel-christmassy-yet-the-AS-characters-never-will is surround by irony, and professors and philosiphers studied it for copious amounts of time...but alack nothing was discovered...(maybe its the snow,there is certainly a lack of it in england)I think this is my favourite chapter so far, Im not sure, Im torn between this one and the one with Rosiel and Katan...either way its amazing!
Contra Mundi 2006-12-16 ch 4,	abuseAw. The Metatron is so cute.huggles him This chapter was sweet. Really. I liked the way you portrayed Sev...Sev...GAH! I can never remember his (we'll call Sev- for convenience sake. ^_^;;) name. Evrytime I have to mention him, I feel like saying what Setsuna said when he was making the speech: "Ah! Screw the rest!" Anyways, I liked the way you portrayed Sevy-person. This has made me rather liked him a letle. I was really pissed at him for sentencing Zaphikel to the wing-drop (ouch.) I liked the way you made him seem so much like a father to Metatron. God knows, the kid needs someone to take care of him, other than that creepy-rabbit-that-might-actually-be-his-brother-I-have-no-idea-I-haven't-gotten-that-far-yet. XD
Contra Mundi 2006-12-16 ch 3,	abuseWHE~! Zaphikel/Raziel! Hmm. I've only just began to notice that whenever I reply to things, I'm usually irritatingly, unusually perky and spazzy. XD But no matter! I always seem to forget that Raziel has some personality in him, ever since I read the part where Zaphikel died...It sticks in my mind cos that was the last time I had seen Raziel. I don't go back to read the first few chapters, where he's more fun. Your fics always remind me that he has rather a bad temper and is extremely cute and sweet. ^_~ And there is always something very nice and funny about the term "impending doom". It's the same way with "screaming bloody murder". XD Raziel is such a stiff. Zaphikel is possibly the only blind person in manga with a sense of humor. thinks hard Em... I really can't remember how these two met... Either that, or I haven't reached the part yet. Speaking of which, I have to get more scans from that asshole site. XD Wonderful work! But I still liked the Michael/Raphael one best. That one was sweet. AND Raphael kissed Michael! ♥
black-ocean 2006-12-16 ch 3,	abuseAwesomeness! I'll e-mail you soon.
mother moon 2006-12-16 ch 3,	abusethese are amazing and makes me feel christmassy all over! I love how everyones a little bit cynical of the event that is christmas in heaven :-) x
Contra Mundi 2006-12-15 ch 2,	abusegaspeth! Oh! I love it! I've never really been a Michael/Raphael shipper, but this one completely converted me! ^w^ loves Gods. I think this is the best stuff you've ever written. They're short (not that long isn't good. But short is easeir on teh mind. ^_^;;), sweet and FLUFFY!! Gotta love the fluffiness. Like Stitch. ^_^ I think there were a few problems with the part where Mika goes: "If I don’t show up for the Christmas day celebration in the capital building at Raquia - to do what? smile pretty? - then I’m gonna be under house arrest for two weeks! Yeah, right. Who’s gonna enforce it, anyway?” I had to read that sentence over a few times before I got what you were trying to convey. But I got it in the end. And when I did, it was hilarious! This one is definitely a, as the critics would normally say, "a laugh-out-loud story". claps Yay! Seriously, I loved this one. WRITE MORE!!

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