Where I come from Micasa is a brand of balls (or is it Mikasa?). Their volleyballs are especially well made.

*wanders off*

the description of the text are very detailed and i should say youve done a good job in bringing tht. i assume with this piece of work your aim was to bring crystal clear images to the reader. you execute tht really well.words are sometimes difficult to play about to bring excact view from the autors perseption, i think u've manage to bring me where you are. i have to say i hated the part where u leave a huge gap of suspence to the readers. who was the person micasa was expecting to return her love? but as for the ending, i'm not sure wheather she's dead or alive or simply been induced to a long sleep.but it doesnt matter, we get the picture tht she's been hurt. maybe you'll continue her character. thts about it. overall id love it if the character was built up from the beginning. its like being shove into a scenario where something is happening and you're left with your wits to catch up the idea. lols.