One word: Update!

You love suspence, don't you?

... intense

*jumps up and down screaming* update... UPDATE!

UPDATE. i love it. it has this strange mystery you have going on on why erik's like that and danny missing. ohh..but i wish you could explain that if solaria is really a full ghost.. why isnt anybody wondering about her white hair at school? and so selene doesn't have ghost powers at all? ohh.. and i love and hate your cliffie at the same time. its a clever idea for a cliffhanger but its really UGH! hehe. so there. PLEASE UPDATE!

"Nothing's wrong."

And now, ladies and gentleman, I give to you... PLOT! Well, not yet, but I can see the edges of it peaking over the edge of the story, and when that happens it can only mean it shall be contain extra surprisingness. Or not. I don't really know.

On a more coherent note, yay for new characters! I just love it how everone is introduced so subtlely, complete with a just the right amount of background for reader enjoyment. And have I mentioned the twins are all fourteen shades of adorable? No? Well now I have.

another good story very exciting evil cliffy sy the way please update soon lots of love
Hugs ;) Ginny

oh no poor Erik :(
Hugs Ginny

yep. that's pretty dang evil.

cool thing- you don't often find characters named Kale...my brother's name is Kahle, which is pronounced the same way.
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Peace out, and update soon.

Yayz! You updated! Great chapter. And a clifie... interesting...
UPDATE SOON!

Great chapter !!

very interesting...i can't wait to see where this leads. nice start. can you tell my shift keys aren't working

As is inevitable, I have already come across a next generation story, and it did everything but disappoint. With your history as a writer of quality, the intrinsic interest level with that of the future and the emotion, intrigue and wonderful setting of the introduction/s I doubt this one will be any different.

Not much to comment on so far as these ARE introductions, although I loved how the first chapter was mostly in Sam’s thoughts, the devotion of Jack and Maddie, Selene’s and Solaria’s sisterly bond and the wide spectrum of emotions.

i'll admit, i'm not pleased that you killed sam, and that danny is missing, but that's the fangirl in me. now that i've read it, i'm intrigued and excited to see more. i love the interaction with the twins, but i admit i'm curious about erik the most. he seems like a guy i would've crushed on back when i was in high school. tall, dark and mysterious, and definitely with secrets i (and i'm sure other readers) are anxious to learn. look forward to more!

~cd

Loved it! :D Update soon and keep up the awesome work!