|Reviews for Who will mourn Orochimaru?|
| I'll Be Your Lie 4/20/11 . chapter 1
Alright so I only have one issue with this... I REALLY wish it was longer! I like the idea of the plot though so it's still a good job in my book :)
-I'll Be Your Lie
| maple-leaf96 12/2/09 . chapter 1
omg tts so sad.
no happy ending i guess.
i cant read japanese for the world so i'm glad u put up a translation.
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX 8/14/09 . chapter 1
aw, this was sad...
| ArtysSexKitten 5/31/08 . chapter 1
Q_Q ... I'll mourn him! . I'd collect the Dragonballs and wish him back if I could, and then he could wish for eternal life! o That was so sad... you almost made me cry *lie, is crying* I'm not crying, I've got something in my... eye is all.. _ ... *cries anyway*
| FireFly92 12/26/07 . chapter 1
you should continue this... SO COOL!
*crying* I love it. I admit, Orochimaru is prolly my least favorite character, but one of my fav pairings is OroJira! T_T
| ObsessiveCompulsive5699 8/27/07 . chapter 1
that was sad, but i liked it
| fiore777 8/6/07 . chapter 1
The short descriptions and lines worked well, I liked parts of it. I'm not sure I like the idea of Orochimaru speaking about how it hurt, I don't know, something feels a little off about it. But that aside, I like the rest, particularly how Orochimaru reacted to Jiraiya's apology.
| PaperDragonfly 2/25/07 . chapter 1
Aww (cries)... that was really emotional and sad (sniffle)... and I can honestly say it made me tear up...
I loved it! Believe it!
| Hinata85 2/2/07 . chapter 1
Poor Oro… ;.; but at least Jira was there with him ;.;
Very good. Sad, but great ficcy nonetheless _
| FlurryDivider 1/21/07 . chapter 1
AW. Thats so sad and poetic. I am so moved by the feeling in the story.
| ScarrFace 1/6/07 . chapter 1
Poor Orochimaru but uh what's hurting him?.._;
| ShadowRaine 12/23/06 . chapter 1
like your poem(or whatever it is)
but i have a feeling that if oro dies in the manga/anime, jiraiya really will be the only one who will mourn for him.
| fleurdpine 12/22/06 . chapter 1
Huh ? Can Orochimaru ... cry ?
It's really , really cute ... and so sad !
Sasuke ; ... Orochimara-sama'll never cry like this ...
Apo ; Are you sure of that ?
Sasuke ; I'm his STUDENT ! I know him !
Apo ; ... hm ...
Yeah , I'm an Itachi and Orochimaru's fan - and I love romance with Oro ! ...so I really loved your fic ... !
Thanks for translating it in english ... I can't speak any word of japanese ... so english and french are the two only langages that I can read ( ... sorry for my bad grammar ... It's horrible to write like this ! )...
If you've got time to spend .. I've read this fic on yesterday .. i's also an Oro/Jira ... and I will translate it too in french ;
See ya for another review !
Apolline or Fleurdpine from time to time
| AngelLucifel 12/18/06 . chapter 1
aside from the harry potter one *gack* this is one of your best written...actually, it's so artsy it probably iis batter.
keep it up Onee-san!
| Moth Gypsy 12/16/06 . chapter 1
Heh, I understood the japanese almost as well as this one, I just surprised myself XD I really like both, dont know which more. There was one mistake though, towords the beginning instead of 'Naruto' you accidently put 'Natuto' :P