this is pretty good. update!
^_^

8grins8 awesome fic so far! please update again soon!

*squeals* Axel, yay! ^^

With regard to writing Disney characters: Think of it as a challenge...although I've tried to write them a bit, too, and it's tough. I'm sure you'll do a wonderful job, though.
The rest of the chapter: Great, as always...Haha, Riku's jealous of Sora and Kairi, I never figured out how that little rivalry managed to completely vanish in KH2. See you next chapter!

The plot, she thickens. I like the way you incorporated the end of the game in there. =D Very nice.

Hehe, talk about tension! XD Can't wait to read more of this.

I love your Axel. He's so... Snarky. *cackles* Can't wait for more.

*claps hands* Wonderful, wonderful! You write so well, I just squirm with anticipation when I see that you've updated. Axel was so wonderfully in character, I could picture what everything that he said and did throughout the chapter. The suspense is killing me, so please, keep the chapters coming! I can't wait to see what happens next!

D-Chan! Awesome to see a new KH fic from you!

I've kept your profile in my bookmarks since Lose Yourself, and had thought you were dead for a while. Anywho, looking forward to reading this new fic (I had to comment before I read it, since I was so surprised! ;D ), and I'm sure it's going to be awesome.

Greylocke

:O

D-chan's first fic in ages! I had to read it.
It was great, as usual.

You even put the accent on Naminé's name. Alot of KH2 writers just brush it off. X__X;

"Don't blame Riku"? That's cryptic. Looking forward to your next chapter!

ooh, i really like this. continue son :)

XD very nice; it's usually hard to get my attention, but this did. XDD

O_O.

YOU LIVE!

Great new story, by the way.

Ooh, the suspense! I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter!